djpretzel Posted May 17, 2004 Posted May 17, 2004 Deceptively good. Has some weak points but don't get turned off by the initial simplicity - djp Heyo. I'm=GK. Heres my remix at this geocities link: Its a remix of a grasslands song from Kirby's Dreamland 3 and a bit of the title screen. Advanced-thanks for chekking it/consideration. I'll stop ranting now cuz ive already begun to make less sense. name to credit it to: GK 10q.
Protricity Posted May 18, 2004 Posted May 18, 2004 good SQ straight off the bat. Audio deformation at 1:05. Really messy instrumentation at some points, like in 1:49. Not enough bad to overdo the good. YES Wonder if we can get a version that fixes that audio glitch... Edit: I tried to figure out a way to contact the author, but to no avail. If this song gets rejected, someone tell the author to contact me and we'll see about fixing the audio glitches. It appears to be the key NO point. Edit2: Could not contact author to fix ending and audio glitch, so it'll stay as NO unless someone else wants to try.
Malcos Posted May 28, 2004 Posted May 28, 2004 Very nice mix, and it achieves it's purpose; it's quite calm and relaxed. I'm thinking that I heard some off-key notes at around 1.47 and 2.33 but perhaps it was just dissonance? I'll come back to this one.
DarkeSword Posted June 5, 2004 Posted June 5, 2004 When you die, God will send you to Heaven, because you remixed Kirby music, and mixed it well. There are some wonky notes here and there, but they're few and far between, so I'm gonna say YES. Although I really think we should get a version that fixes the glitch at 1:05.
Vig Posted June 18, 2004 Posted June 18, 2004 slick. simple, straightforward, welldone remixing. perhaps it's a bit repetitive, but it is ultimately rewarding. there are plenty of bad notes in the bass and harmony parts, as well as that audio glitch. unfortunately it isnt finished. you forgot to record the ending. send us the rest, fix the problems, then we'll talk. NO
Digital Coma Posted July 6, 2004 Posted July 6, 2004 Can't pass in good conscience a submission with such an audio glitch as at 1:05. Besides that, there are several detractors to this decent arrangement; namely, weird pitch bends on random notes, dirty upfront shakers/claps, messy bass, and a cut-off ending. The feel is there, the instrumentation is there, the synth accompaniment is cool, but there's a lot left to fix. Like the cut-off ending. Sorry, but this can't pass like this. Fix it up. NO
Vig Posted July 19, 2004 Posted July 19, 2004 this mix has been here since the middle of may. can someone please close it out?
GrayLightning Posted July 19, 2004 Posted July 19, 2004 As pointed out by Vigilante, there's a lot of wonky notes. There's some nice things going on here, like the mixing and the style. But I think there's also a lot of underwhelming things going on here. Everything sounds very mechanical. I also feel the drums/percussion here is much too prominent compared to the instrumental elements (at least on headphones). For a slow chill mix, I think more subtle drums would be more appropriate. Also the ending just ends and leaves you hanging. A decent mix, but considering the problems I think this is just right under the bar. NO
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