Tensei Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 Update 10/6: http://www.tindeck.com/listen/khrv ____________________________________ Update: http://www.tindeck.com/listen/rpyv _____________________________________ http://www.tindeck.com/listen/uwyo Harmonies at the end are offkey, will fix it eventually. Source: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c8h6vt-5B2g Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyril the Wolf Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 bass tone needs more mids. Right now all I hear is some low and CLICK. Generally, the toms/sexy drums need some lo-cut cuz like... my sub is just like insane. Arrangement is awesome though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solaphar Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 bass tone needs more mids. Right now all I hear is some low and CLICK. Generally, the toms/sexy drums need some lo-cut cuz like... my sub is just like insane. Arrangement is awesome though I'll second on the bass clicks. Gets old quick. And I haven't been around here long, but is this a remix or a cover? I haven't yet figured out the line that divides the two around these parts. Yours actually pretty sounds close to the originally, albeit with real instruments instead of synth ones like Uematsu's, and you also have the organ lower in your mix. Sounds good though except for those things Cyril mentioned (like the toms overpowering the bassline). One last thing: some stuff sounds a little out of time. Like the bass rhythm in the beginning as one example. In your final mix, I'm sure you'll redo a lot of that so it should be fine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProjectSpam Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 I'll second on the bass clicks. Gets old quick.And I haven't been around here long, but is this a remix or a cover? I haven't yet figured out the line that divides the two around these parts. Yours actually pretty sounds close to the originally, albeit with real instruments instead of synth ones like Uematsu's, and you also have the organ lower in your mix. Sounds good though except for those things Cyril mentioned (like the toms overpowering the bassline). One last thing: some stuff sounds a little out of time. Like the bass rhythm in the beginning as one example. In your final mix, I'm sure you'll redo a lot of that so it should be fine. I'd say the arrangement is definitely structurally conservative, but I thinkthere's more than enough variations, textures, and new harmonies to at least be on the better side of borderline, as far as arrangement goes. Plus, this hasn't even gotten to the crazy quick organ parts -- I'm sure there's plenty of room to sort of deviate away from the source structure and do some soloing or whatever joren wants to do there. I especially like where the song is going 3/4ths of the way through... just keep it up. Sounds awesome so far, and this source is unjustly underrepresented. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tensei Posted May 28, 2010 Author Share Posted May 28, 2010 Update: http://www.tindeck.com/listen/rpyv Yeah, timing is off in some parts but I generally don't re-record before I have the basic idea down. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyril the Wolf Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 bass is much better. And sexy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solaphar Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 I'll agree that the bass tone is much improved, but the clicks still grate on me. Maybe it's just 'cause they seem slightly arrhythmic. It sounds good overall. I'm liking the stuff you added since the first post. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tensei Posted June 10, 2010 Author Share Posted June 10, 2010 http://www.tindeck.com/listen/khrv Update with lots of keychanges and a transition to The Extreme with quad-tracked rhythm guitars. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monobrow Posted June 15, 2010 Share Posted June 15, 2010 Okay... Intro was cool, it's all pretty fitting. Guitar is great. Organ comes in nicely, bass too. So far, this is very cover-ish honestly. It kind of follows note for note, but w/e. Yay, okay scratch cover, you broke off... finally, the organ comes in... Do more of that, do it all over the place, I love organ. Good solo and drums. Don't be afraid to put more organ EVERYWHERE, even if you are just stabbing with eighth notes or making it seem like the player is ODing and slamming keys everywhere and feels like soloing in the middle of the song and pissing the rest of the band off. I want guitar vs. organ BATTLE. So anyway, nice transition to the extreme... But bring it back to lion plz, and go crazy. HOPE I HELPED, LOL. Godo luck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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