The Radical Sifu Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 Hi everyone, got another new currently untitled WIP, this time it's Mega Man 7 and the Junkman theme It still needs to have an ending put on it, the drums need to be varied up (which I'll do as one of my last jobs, so please don't pick me up on it, I know it needs doing ) and the mixing lacks general polish at this moment. But it exists in complete enough form for you to get some idea where I'm coming from. NEW VERSION: http://cbnow.co.uk/theradicalsifu/Mega_Man_7_WIP_2.mp3 OLD VERSION: http://cbnow.co.uk/theradicalsifu/Mega_Man_7_WIP.mp3 Please be critical, brutally if necessary! All I ask is that you take the time to explain your comments, be they good or bad Thank you, hope you enjoy it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 Hard to get a grip on the rhythm at the beginning. One of the bass notes seems like it's a semi-tone off, and it gets kind'a annoying when it's repeated. Bass drum is a bit weak, bass is a little loud. The whole track seems a little slow. An increase of 2 bpm could make a huge difference. Bring out the choir more during the emptier parts. Nice track. Not gonna look up the source, but I think it's got potential. You've got a decent arrangement, nice dynamics... Good luck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phantasia Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 It is a bit empty overall. Could use some thicker pads or some synth fills or whatever to fill up some sonic space. Bring out the choir as Roz said is a good idea. There is a backing synth that feels kind of thin (the slightly distorted one). Perhaps it would work with some other more filling stuff. Alone it sounds weird. Snare drum is a tad bit loud imo. Another kick sample is a good idea too. The outro was cool ^^. The track is a bit slow and it sort of never lifts off imo. I don't know the source though. My two cents. Sry if I came off too hard. There is stuff I liked in there but I focused on the critique to help you =). The track has potential. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Radical Sifu Posted June 3, 2010 Author Share Posted June 3, 2010 Thanks for the comments, I've got an updated version: http://cbnow.co.uk/theradicalsifu/Mega_Man_7_WIP_2.mp3 Drums still need varying up, still need a proper ending on it. Plus I think I've overcompressed it a bit. But still, what do you reckon on it thus far, those issues aside? EDIT: sorry, just reuploaded it with some minor changes to the levels Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Radical Sifu Posted June 4, 2010 Author Share Posted June 4, 2010 Anyone? I can see you all viewing the thread. C'mon, don't be shy. What have I got to do to this to make it sub-able Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gravenspine Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 Anyone? I can see you all viewing the thread. C'mon, don't be shy. What have I got to do to this to make it sub-able Hi Radical Sifu. I do believe your remix is great. Well me, I like it. Keep up good work. -Ceddy Pop Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.