Lampje4life Posted August 26, 2010 Share Posted August 26, 2010 Remix Title: Modairnizing (Modernizing with 'Air') Original Song Link: Remix Link: http://tindeck.com/listen/mrwk Remix was Requested by AJ-enova here: http://ocremix.org/forums/showthread.php?t=18881 Ok, so I'm working on a Retro Dance Remix from the Airship theme (FFXI). I dislike to post WIP's that are quite short, so you're all getting a full length WIP! What I'm looking for is feedback and critics. Hopefully people will also like some parts, but basically I wanna know if the flow works and nothing falls behind. 1:23-1:37 is a little part I'm not satisfied about yet. I know it's not OCR worthy, I'm not aiming for that. Tips about quality etc are welcome, but keep the previous in mind please! Enjoy! -edit: Updated to a kinda Final Version. Still gonna fix some stuff but the arrangement is mostly done. Download here http://tindeck.com/listen/mrwk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dj Mokram Posted August 26, 2010 Share Posted August 26, 2010 This is pretty far from the original in terms of style and overall sound choices, but the source is here and it sounds pretty good to me so far. I really love when the main melody kicks in at 0:56 with that lofi lead. Very pleasant nostalgic moment right here. I'm not versed enough in either this genre or the prod aspect to delve on that, so I leave it to the people who know to give harsher crits. A whole box of kudos for, once again, giving some love to the FFXI soundtrack. Keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Modus Posted August 27, 2010 Share Posted August 27, 2010 Sweet.. sounds like an enhanced version of the original. I've heard the tune a million times as a past FFXI player, so this is so.. so refreshing. I really don't know what else to say.. as far as arrangements and samples and so forth it sounds good to me as an average listener. Kudos. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AJ-enova Posted August 27, 2010 Share Posted August 27, 2010 Wow! A request I made ages ago has been noticed XD I like the pacing of but the layers seem to blur together. You should try making each part sound more distinct. Like the bass beat could sound a bit softer, and the main melody a bit more noticable, things like that. But overall very good Thanks for this lol you've given me a good start to a day Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lampje4life Posted August 27, 2010 Author Share Posted August 27, 2010 Thanks for the replies! I'll wrap it up in the next few days. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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