*NO* Mario Paint 'Pario Maint'

[Liontamer]

Contact Information

ReMixer name: Nino Mojo

real name: Romain Gauthier

email address: info@ninomojo.com

website: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Nino-Mojo/176919580012?ref=ts

Submission Information

name of game arranged: Mario Paint

name of song arranged: BGM 1 (also referred to as "Push-Ups")

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http://ocremix.org/chip/6754 - "Creative Exercise" (mpnt-09.spc)

It's underdeveloped at only 2:02, but that length can work. The second iteration of the theme wasn't a 100% cut-and-paste, though it was still pretty close. Let's call it 99%. That's just not gonna fly.

I love the piece, Romain, but 1:06-on needs to not sound like a total retread of the first section. Add more variation to the second verse, and this would be cool.

Great stuff so far, it sounds ace. Now develop the second half into something more substantial and different for the win. Even if it's not a revision of this piece, I hope we see a lot more submitted from you down the line.

NO (resubmit)

[DragonAvenger]

Absolutely agree with Larry. This is some awesome stuff, but the (near) repeat of the theme the second time just isn't going to cut it. Please develop the second half and resubmit!

NO (resubmit, please!)

[OceansAndrew]

Great sounds and a super funky beat. This starts out incredibly! I'm immediately hooked.

It does feel pretty rehashed for the second half, and seriously, this song is begging for you to cut loose and do some soloing. I mean, there are some little bits here and there, but I want to hear something really substantial! Maybe I am too demanding! I don't know!

Overall it's really good and the production is great, but it needs more variation. From the sound of things, you are more than skilled enough to rock it out, so I hope you do it!

no, please resubmit