djpretzel Posted February 19, 2005 Share Posted February 19, 2005 Contact Info ? Your ReMixer name - Red_Egg ? Your real name - Michael R ? Your email address - ricky.kid@gmail.com • ReMix Info ? Name of game(s) ReMixed - Legend of Zelda the Windwaker ? Name of individual song(s) ReMixed - originally "Dragon Roost Island" renamed to "e-dri" ? Your own comments about the mix, for example the inspiration behind it, how it was made, etc. - Made in GarageBand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liontamer Posted February 19, 2005 Share Posted February 19, 2005 Decent though conservative ideas on the arrangement, though the intro almost felt like a MIDI rip + beats. Tempo and structure's a bit too similar as well, though you're at least pulling off a half-decent genre adaptation. Not much (if any) variation going into the second iteration of the arrangement starting at 1:31. Sounds are pretty beginner-ish, but check out the ReMixing forum for some ways in which you can improve your skills. Far from making the grade, but not bad for a first sub, and I hope you keep at it. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkeSword Posted February 20, 2005 Share Posted February 20, 2005 Please. It's the melody by itself on a grating high synth with sustained pads in the background playing over some beats. And it repeats. Needs harmony, countermelody, variation, and development. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Israfel Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 A bit overly simplistic right now. It's not a complete waste, but it certainly needs more work. There's just not enough here to maintain interest. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrayLightning Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 This is too simplistic. I don't know what to add here that others have not already said. This sounds underdeveloped in many respects and sounds incomplete. Please work on this more. Production as a whole is average, samples sound GMish. I did like the synth pad/choir that appeared later on in the extreme left of the stereo field. But while we're on that, I think the spread is way too extreme. The shakers are a little out of place with the hard right placement in my opinion, and aren't balanced with much activity on the extreme left side. Needs more work, NO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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