cvstheabstract Posted August 11, 2011 Share Posted August 11, 2011 Here my remix too, One of the Legend of Zelda Track I would love Feedback from you guys and your personal Opinions on it. Here the link http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/439051 Name of Game: Legend of Zelda :Majora's Mask Name of Song Arranged:Elegy of Emptiness Composer: Kōji Kondō Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Watarimono Posted August 11, 2011 Share Posted August 11, 2011 Mm, I like it... That ambient feeling of the song... It would seem a bit difficult to make a ReMix out of a simple ocarina melody, but I think you did a nice job. I don't think I have any complaints... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonah-B Posted August 11, 2011 Share Posted August 11, 2011 I agree with Watarimono. It sounds really nice. I like the ambient feeling you've achieved here. If I were to give a constructive criticism it would be varying up the drums a little. They got a tad bit repetitive for me. Maybe also toning down their volume a bit. That might just be a matter of personal taste though, because I think I would have focused more on the ambient strengths the piece had and made the percussion more of a background thing, but you chose to make them a focus point. Overall though I really enjoyed it. Great work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GravitySuitCollector Posted August 11, 2011 Share Posted August 11, 2011 "This sounds great. It gets a bit repetitive with the same sounds, though, with it going for 3 min. If you can, try adding in something more in the last half (maybe), and maybe a slight bit less panning with the delayed melody in the beginning; it's a bit too much starting off. See if you can improve it a bit." Straight copy of my comment on Newgrounds. Anyways, I'm listening to it on repeat right now, even though it isn't quite necessary (the second third is almost the same as the first part, try doing something a bit different, maybe?). I love the percussion; the hip hop beat does a good job of keeping it going. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted August 22, 2011 Share Posted August 22, 2011 The sounds are terrible, there's a huge disparity between the slow lead synth and the hard beat. While I understand a mix going either simple and soft or aggressive and hard, or transitioning from one to the other, you seem to have trouble making up your mind. Learn to do a more cohesive sound design for your tracks and they'll turn out so much better. Repetition quickly becomes a problem, a typical one for a short source like this. You could screw with its rhythm and play it in different scales, or incorporate a second source into it to mitigate the repetitiveness. Keep it up, MM needs more remixes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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