Pumpkin King Posted April 23, 2012 Share Posted April 23, 2012 I did this one in a few days after my arrangement of Forest Interlude. This is an orchestral arrangement of Flight of the Zinger from Donkey Kong Country 2. I love the music from that series and may do more arrangements in the future. Anyways, I'd like some feedback for this one. Source tune: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YLcWH1Z9VeQ *UPDATED ARRANGEMENT: AND: http://soundcloud.com/pumpkin-king/dkc-flight-of-the-zinger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jnWake Posted April 23, 2012 Share Posted April 23, 2012 This is quite cool. It isn't very different to the original arrangement-wise but the sounds used are nice. Using the xylophone at the beggining was a good choice and the strings sound nice. The drums are a bit weird in my opinion, they sound a bit off-beat, but I don't know if that's just me. Anyway, I enjoyed it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pumpkin King Posted April 23, 2012 Author Share Posted April 23, 2012 Thanks man! I dunno, but the drums were in beat. Hmm... maybe the problem lies with the number of tracks. I had a lot going, and at points, things can be drowned out. But I kept it as is. Thanks again for listening! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gario Posted April 24, 2012 Share Posted April 24, 2012 I liked the arrangement on this one quite a bit, here. Personally, I really liked how it never really loses the more mellow atmosphere throughout (unlike the source and most remixes, which explode with energy after a short time). Even at the climax, even though it's bigger, it doesn't open up to a high energy atmosphere, and I thought that was neat. One common note that only affects a small portion of your strings (the parts that hold the faster melodic portions): there's too much swell for each of the attacks. If there's a way to automate the attack so the strings don't swell into each attack that would help the realism of the strings greatly. For the slow string portions it's not a problem. The drums were a little on the weak side. That could be solved with a simple increase in volume, though - just be careful not to mess up any production in the process, if you do try to fix it. I liked this otherwise, though. Nice work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris ~ Amaterasu Posted April 24, 2012 Share Posted April 24, 2012 I really enjoyed this one also, great job =) Retains a lot of the atmosphere well I think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pumpkin King Posted April 24, 2012 Author Share Posted April 24, 2012 Thanks Chris, I really appreciate it! @Gario - Thanks man. I read this earlier and tried updating the strings a bit. In Garageband, I was already aware about the release time of the strings, and I did try to automate them with a smaller release time. So I did it again. Also, I updated the drums, too. Though the deep bass tones still drown parts out. But I want to keep it that way with my legato bass/cello strings, since in the source the low tones were pretty dominant. And then I edited the volumes of the strings which were loud in areas, along with changing part of the flute melody in the end, and making the xylophone a bit softer. I reuploaded it to my soundcloud account since it's easier that way. When it's how I want it to be, I'll probably reupload it to youtube. So here's the song from soundcloud if anyone wants to hear the updated version: http://soundcloud.com/pumpkin-king/dkc-flight-of-the-zinger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
htotheig Posted April 25, 2012 Share Posted April 25, 2012 I really like the drive of this song. Excellent cover! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pumpkin King Posted April 26, 2012 Author Share Posted April 26, 2012 I really like the drive of this song. Excellent cover! Thanks! Much appreciated! And btw, I made some slight changes and uploaded them both to youtube and soundcloud. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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