Argle Posted June 26, 2012 Share Posted June 26, 2012 Subbed this the other day, but I figure it'll take 6 months to even get judged, so here it is. It's primarily a chilllout/triphop number. I'm pretty happy with it. link: Mario Ascends to the Clouds Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dafydd Posted June 26, 2012 Share Posted June 26, 2012 This was fun. And the string sections were unusally well made, I have to say. Seen this, by the way? http://ocremix.org/forums/showthread.php?t=37565 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tesselode Posted June 26, 2012 Share Posted June 26, 2012 I agree about the string section; it's quite nice. As for the rest of the song, I definitely like the calm feel of it, but I think it has a problem with just sounding weak in general. For example when the main melody starts at 0:52, the synth playing the main melody is kind of quiet and weak-sounding and could use more expression. Really the whole song is kind of quiet and has a lot of trouble building up to anything. The part at 3:11 definitely sounds like it's supposed to be louder than the other parts, but it's not. I think a lot of this can be fixed by more dynamics and more moving parts. I also don't like the ending, but that's the thing I'm least worried about currently. If you can make the song slightly less wimpy, it'll sound great. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argle Posted June 26, 2012 Author Share Posted June 26, 2012 Seen this. by the way? http://ocremix.org/forums/showthread.php?t=37565 I had not. Looks cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiwalker Posted June 27, 2012 Share Posted June 27, 2012 I agree about the string section; it's quite nice.just sounding weak in general. For example when the main melody starts at 0:52, the synth playing the main melody is kind of quiet and weak-sounding and could use more expression. Really the whole song is kind of quiet and has a lot of trouble building up to anything. The part at 3:11 definitely sounds like it's supposed to be louder than the other parts, but it's not. I think a lot of this can be fixed by more dynamics and more moving parts. I also don't like the ending, but that's the thing I'm least worried about currently. If you can make the song slightly less wimpy, it'll sound great. Turn that synth up! it's a pretty conservative generic sound but it's nice how you add the pitch lfo'ing in there Love this song, good source and maybe there isn't enough sound or instruments to fill the spectrum but I like it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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