Defiant00 Posted August 17, 2012 Share Posted August 17, 2012 Wasn't sure about some of the earlier versions, but this latest one is quite good. Got a couple small suggestions though: 1) With the piano to the right I found myself wanting something to the left to balance it out a bit (please note that I know my hearing leans toward the right somewhat, so it's quite possible that I'm the only one who thinks this ) 2) For your wobble bass I think it would be better if it didn't show up and disappear so abruptly. For example, the first time it shows up at 1:05 it might be better if it faded in right before you actually started using it at 1:05. And then from 1:08-1:15 I keep expecting it to show back up but it doesn't again until 1:15. And at 1:30 and 1:36 it feels a bit slow/off compared to the rest of your wobble writing. Basically, I think the wobble's a neat idea but it feels a bit disjoint from the rest of the song to me right now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YannickJason Posted August 23, 2012 Author Share Posted August 23, 2012 Wasn't sure about some of the earlier versions, but this latest one is quite good. Got a couple small suggestions though:1) With the piano to the right I found myself wanting something to the left to balance it out a bit (please note that I know my hearing leans toward the right somewhat, so it's quite possible that I'm the only one who thinks this ) 2) For your wobble bass I think it would be better if it didn't show up and disappear so abruptly. For example, the first time it shows up at 1:05 it might be better if it faded in right before you actually started using it at 1:05. And then from 1:08-1:15 I keep expecting it to show back up but it doesn't again until 1:15. And at 1:30 and 1:36 it feels a bit slow/off compared to the rest of your wobble writing. Basically, I think the wobble's a neat idea but it feels a bit disjoint from the rest of the song to me right now. Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, my piano vst pans depending on where it is in the scale. I need to work more on the EQ of the wobble bass. It does get kind of quiet too. I'll try the fade in. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garpocalypse Posted August 23, 2012 Share Posted August 23, 2012 I've missed the last few versions but it sounds like it's coming along pretty well. It sounds like you were trying out some counterpoint under the melody. You could easily squeeze even more out of the remix if you play around with it. Keep it going! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YannickJason Posted August 29, 2012 Author Share Posted August 29, 2012 Here's a smaller, not too significant update. I changed around a few things and lengthened the "wubs" some. http://www.box.com/s/cdf0b53c4c14fc138215 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YannickJason Posted August 30, 2012 Author Share Posted August 30, 2012 So, I'm getting stuck on this piano part because I'm not hearing the chords properly. I really want this to sound good, but I'm just not getting it. Would anyone like to help out a guy using FL Studio? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted August 30, 2012 Share Posted August 30, 2012 So, I'm getting stuck on this piano part because I'm not hearing the chords properly. I really want this to sound good, but I'm just not getting it. Would anyone like to help out a guy using FL Studio? What do you mean by "I'm not hearing the chords properly"? Are you having trouble finding the right chords to use for a certain section? I'm hoping it's this, because you should try to use different chords than those from the OST. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pl511 Posted August 31, 2012 Share Posted August 31, 2012 If you want any help with that piano, I could perform some of it if you send me the MIDI. I could also write you a solo or something if you wanted help with anything like that. I haven't got FLStudio, but I can send you back a mp3/whatever file to insert back into your file. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SonicThHedgog Posted August 31, 2012 Share Posted August 31, 2012 http://www.box.com/s/cdf0b53c4c14fc138215 This version is the best Imo, I really like this. If you send me track stems (individually in wav. no effects or eq's on them) I can mix/master this track for you, sounds really dope! (I will take no credit) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YannickJason Posted August 31, 2012 Author Share Posted August 31, 2012 What do you mean by "I'm not hearing the chords properly"? Are you having trouble finding the right chords to use for a certain section? I'm hoping it's this, because you should try to use different chords than those from the OST. I'm having trouble hearing the right chords... Erhm, that is to say I was having trouble. I've got the chords down now and I'm doing some more fine tuning. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YannickJason Posted August 31, 2012 Author Share Posted August 31, 2012 If you want any help with that piano, I could perform some of it if you send me the MIDI. I could also write you a solo or something if you wanted help with anything like that. I haven't got FLStudio, but I can send you back a mp3/whatever file to insert back into your file. Thanks so much for the offer! I would love a piano performance. Could you do it in MIDI format? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YannickJason Posted August 31, 2012 Author Share Posted August 31, 2012 This version is the best Imo, I really like this.If you send me track stems (individually in wav. no effects or eq's on them) I can mix/master this track for you, sounds really dope! (I will take no credit) I shall soon be ready to take you up on your offer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YannickJason Posted August 31, 2012 Author Share Posted August 31, 2012 So many incremental saves... This is hard work! http://www.box.com/s/rlv7nhitzj7emqsi2idu One more update. If I get good feedback from you guys as well as the friend I'm doing this for, I'll be done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SonicThHedgog Posted August 31, 2012 Share Posted August 31, 2012 I shall soon be ready to take you up on your offer. Here is an example an example http://www.mediafire.com/?n3m7pglkybb3ihv Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YannickJason Posted August 31, 2012 Author Share Posted August 31, 2012 Here is an example an example http://www.mediafire.com/?n3m7pglkybb3ihv Wow! That's really awesome. I'd love to hear what you can do with my new version. I'll send you the WAV files tomorrow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pl511 Posted September 1, 2012 Share Posted September 1, 2012 Thanks so much for the offer! I would love a piano performance. Could you do it in MIDI format? Of course! Just PM me a midi file of the remix (the whole thing would be fairly nice to work on a possible solo or something) and I'll get onto making that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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