Zeroboros Posted December 28, 2012 Share Posted December 28, 2012 A terra theme remix I really ended up getting into for a long time. there are some things i need to tweak but i needed to get the general idea out. Hopefully you guys can give some constructive feedback and help me fine tune this badboy so i can post it up for submission. Any Constructive and otherwise feedback is much appreciated! http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=12077396&q=hi&newref=1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
210LG Posted December 28, 2012 Share Posted December 28, 2012 So far so good to me...Keep it up! what program you use? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted December 29, 2012 Share Posted December 29, 2012 The snare is too quiet. There could also be a smidge more bass. The guitar is too quiet at 0:40. The piano is too quiet overall, and might be a bit too dry. Otherwise fine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroboros Posted December 29, 2012 Author Share Posted December 29, 2012 the snare is quiet? hmmmm......will check that later on today as i go. Might adjust the settings on the limiter i have on the guitar to. I'll see how that goes. Oh and to answer your question 210LG, I use FL Studio 10. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted December 29, 2012 Share Posted December 29, 2012 the snare is quiet? hmmmm......will check that later on today as i go. Might adjust the settings on the limiter i have on the guitar to. I'll see how that goes. Oh and to answer your question 210LG, I use FL Studio 10. Well, according to my new headphones, the snare is quiet after 0:18 (I've already slightly adjusted volumes to get a comparable volume to my previous ones). Cool, I can give FL-specific advice if you want. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroboros Posted December 29, 2012 Author Share Posted December 29, 2012 sure could be helpful, pm me and we'll see. putting this up for mod review. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroboros Posted December 30, 2012 Author Share Posted December 30, 2012 bump. any feedback would be much appreciated:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XPRTNovice Posted December 31, 2012 Share Posted December 31, 2012 Hey, I like this. I would say that I think the guitar work in the beginning is choppy...might want to look at your sequencing or find someone to play it live. The second guitar entrance at around 1:50 is better, but I think that's because you're doubling it there so it covers up the "fakeness" of the sound. It happens again at 3:20 or so. To me, it's the unnatural cutoff of that sound - might want to extend the release and you'd be in better shape. Then again I'm a guitar player and I can be picky Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroboros Posted January 1, 2013 Author Share Posted January 1, 2013 thanks for the tip on the guitar bit. i did know that the guitar solo's were rigid but i did want to get the general idea. Plus, I'd rather hear it from a guitar player since im using guitar samples anyway will post adjustments later on tonight.anything more would be beneficial Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted January 19, 2013 Share Posted January 19, 2013 Really loud. Especially loud high-end percussion and other high stuff. Tone that stuff down a bit. Piano is a bit soft compared to the electronic instrumentation. One minute in, source is obvious. Some weird harmonies behind it. I hear references and use of the source's backing elsewhere in the track, so it should be in the clear source-wise. Ending feels a bit lame. Not so much the fade, but that nothing else changed during the ending. You just drop to a solo and fade once the solo is over. Feels a bit cheap. Too loud stuff, and with some other minor mixing problems. Weird harmonies. Boring ending. Otherwise it works quite well. A bit too much saturation and other loudening. Balance it better and you should have a pretty good shot at the site here. Cool stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroboros Posted January 25, 2013 Author Share Posted January 25, 2013 Really loud. Especially loud high-end percussion and other high stuff. Tone that stuff down a bit. Piano is a bit soft compared to the electronic instrumentation.One minute in, source is obvious. Some weird harmonies behind it. I hear references and use of the source's backing elsewhere in the track, so it should be in the clear source-wise. Ending feels a bit lame. Not so much the fade, but that nothing else changed during the ending. You just drop to a solo and fade once the solo is over. Feels a bit cheap. Too loud stuff, and with some other minor mixing problems. Weird harmonies. Boring ending. Otherwise it works quite well. A bit too much saturation and other loudening. Balance it better and you should have a pretty good shot at the site here. Cool stuff. thank godness you told me that man!! been getting hammered with work and other responsibilites so i haven't had a chance to hop back on the PC and rework it. thank you for the constructive feedback, cause this'll definitely help! of to work on it now! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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