Esperado Posted June 26, 2013 Share Posted June 26, 2013 https://soundcloud.com/jesse-mitchell-3/soul-tracks-loz-spirit-tracks It definitely needs some work. it should probably be longer, and change up some of the mixing ( the organ sound is a violator here) I will update it with a better mixed version soon. leave any other advice you might have though. Please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nostalvania Posted June 27, 2013 Share Posted June 27, 2013 (edited) Yep, that organ sounds strange, and it’s a bit loud. Maybe it’s just me, but for some reason the kick drum sound bothers me a bit. Did you layer the kick? The transition at 1:51 could be a bit smoother IMO. Other than that, nice work. Keep it up! Edited June 27, 2013 by Nostalvania Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timaeus222 Posted June 28, 2013 Share Posted June 28, 2013 Kick at 0:31 is quiet. I can kinda hear a literal click, but it's nowhere near the ideal strength. 0:52 organ definitely doesn't fit, and I haven't a clue what it's doing there. I think 1:03-1:14 sounds pretty dissonant in the wrong way. You can hear it pretty clearly because of the polyphonic saw wave you used. Speaking of which, I think that's a really plain saw wave. Needs a little more personality to its tone. Maybe some detuning and heavy vibrato. 1:22 has weird low bass notes that seem to make it muddy, and makes it worse on the rhodes at 1:26. 1:51 key change is abrupt. 1:59 pitch dropping gated effect is pretty cool. 2:28 needs more to lead into that ambient ending. Interesting concept, needs those updates. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esperado Posted June 29, 2013 Author Share Posted June 29, 2013 Kick at 0:31 is quiet. I can kinda hear a literal click, but it's nowhere near the ideal strength. 0:52 organ definitely doesn't fit, and I haven't a clue what it's doing there. I think 1:03-1:14 sounds pretty dissonant in the wrong way. You can hear it pretty clearly because of the polyphonic saw wave you used. Speaking of which, I think that's a really plain saw wave. Needs a little more personality to its tone. Maybe some detuning and heavy vibrato. 1:22 has weird low bass notes that seem to make it muddy, and makes it worse on the rhodes at 1:26. 1:51 key change is abrupt. 1:59 pitch dropping gated effect is pretty cool. 2:28 needs more to lead into that ambient ending. Interesting concept, needs those updates. the bass notes is a pad, maybe its too loud or mixed improperly? unless its something else. ill check. definitely will change out the the lead. the pitch dropping is abletons built in beat repeater on a stock marimba sound that has the pitch decay turned most of the way up. so it makes nice sparkly sounds when it hits. anyways thanks as always! ill get on those changes and get back to you guys Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eino Keskitalo Posted June 29, 2013 Share Posted June 29, 2013 I liked the PRC version quite a bit so I'm looking forward to the update! --Eino Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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