Necrox Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 (edited) I haven't heard any remixes of this song, but I think this might be one of the less conventional ones. Feedback of all sorts is appreciated. https://soundcloud.com/atheox/love-is Edited December 8, 2013 by Necrox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelCityOutlaw Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 What is love? You mean where is love. There is no link, but I'd love to listen to it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necrox Posted November 26, 2013 Author Share Posted November 26, 2013 What is love? You mean where is love. There is no link, but I'd love to listen to it. Fixed, my bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelCityOutlaw Posted November 26, 2013 Share Posted November 26, 2013 A few thoughts on this track: The intro leaves a lot to be desired. You have that melody and a pad, then it stops and begins again with a drum beat. The piece would be better off to start at around 1:44. The melody you have in that section starting at about 50 seconds and especially around 1:14 is really bad. A lot of very dissonant intervals, the phrasing is weak and it doesn't work together with your harmony. I also think your choice of synth tones isn't quite up to par with the original. The main thing that needs work here in my opinion, is the composition Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necrox Posted November 26, 2013 Author Share Posted November 26, 2013 Which synth tones are you referring to? Are you talking about all of them or the ones closer to the original (like the 2nd bass track)? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necrox Posted December 8, 2013 Author Share Posted December 8, 2013 Bump. Anyone? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garrett Williamson Posted December 8, 2013 Share Posted December 8, 2013 Bump. Anyone? link is dead on the other hand WHAT IS LOVE BABY DON'T HURT ME DON'T HURT ME NO MORE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necrox Posted December 8, 2013 Author Share Posted December 8, 2013 (edited) link is deadon the other hand WHAT IS LOVE BABY DON'T HURT ME DON'T HURT ME NO MORE Done. It should work now. Edited December 8, 2013 by Necrox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necrox Posted December 10, 2013 Author Share Posted December 10, 2013 Bump again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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