Coucou Posted September 8, 2006 Share Posted September 8, 2006 This an old C64 game called "Rescue on Fractalus!" remix. Early WIP http://gjandot.free.fr/php/tunes.php?num=0 V2 (19th Oct): http://gjandot.free.fr/php/tunes.php?num=1 V3 (31st Oct): http://gjandot.free.fr/php/tunes.php?num=2 Newest and possible final version (15th Nov): http://gjandot.free.fr/php/tunes.php?num=3 Thanks for feedback, comments and suggestions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nec5 Posted September 8, 2006 Share Posted September 8, 2006 I'm having a hard time giving feedback on this one. The sounds employed are pretty good. The piece seems to be missing some meat. You said this is pretty early, so that's likely the culprit. I can give one specific piece of feedback: Around 1:07', the piece shifts. It's a neat shift; however, try to up the emphasis on the background synth(the sci-fi synth that is particulary evident around 1:13'). That would create a cool smooth atmosphere that you could contrast with other segments of the song. Just a thought. I hope this helps. The C64 had some great tunes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coucou Posted October 19, 2006 Author Share Posted October 19, 2006 Previous state of the remix WIP: http://gjandot.free.fr/php/tunes.php?num=1 Thanks for your comments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coucou Posted October 31, 2006 Author Share Posted October 31, 2006 New state of the remix WIP: http://gjandot.free.fr/php/tunes.php?num=2 I still need to work on intro, end, and mixing. Thanks for your comments and suggestions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coucou Posted November 15, 2006 Author Share Posted November 15, 2006 A proposed final version of the remix: http://gjandot.free.fr/php/tunes.php?num=3 Thanks for your comments and suggestions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coucou Posted November 16, 2006 Author Share Posted November 16, 2006 Proposed final version of the remix: http://gjandot.free.fr/php/tunes.php?num=3 Thanks for your comments and suggestions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ericharris Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 exactly what is this song To the song portion, i think this is much better than anything i could do, but it's not submittion ready. The judges love to nit pick at stuid things like the tone of the synths and repataive themes. Honestly, this work sounds like a water downed version of a mixer called sephfire. But this is really not bad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dahlia Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 The judges love to nit pick at stuid things like the tone of the synths and repataive themes. Limited thematic material explored in repetitive fashion is a piece-killing flaw, not a "stuid thing". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zipp Posted November 17, 2006 Share Posted November 17, 2006 The judges love to nit pick at stuid things like the tone of the synths and repataive themes. Limited thematic material explored in repetitive fashion is a piece-killing flaw, not a "stuid thing". Seconded! While the sounds in this piece are not bad, there's little that actually happens. And the source material isn't good enough that I want to listen to the same segment over and over. This needs diversity. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
epyx Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 @Coucou would you please link to the latest version you produced? Would like to listen. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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