PhonicB∞m Posted March 19, 2020 Share Posted March 19, 2020 I've always wanted to do an arrangement of this tune, which plays as you and your partner tuck in for the night after completing a mission. A few days ago, inspiration struck, and I developed a swingy lo-fi hip-hop rendition with a more cheerful chord progression. I'm pretty happy with the sound and mix currently, and have a friend working on a saxophone solo for the middle rep where the lead drops out around 1:22, but I'd like to have some extra ears on it before I call it cooked. https://clyp.it/xvmn2ain Cole Train 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonicB∞m Posted March 19, 2020 Author Share Posted March 19, 2020 Fixed a few sour notes, changed a string pattern, adjusted EQ and mix. Leaving up the old version for feedback on whether the EQ is better before or after. https://clyp.it/rfkv2euk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Audiomancer Posted March 20, 2020 Share Posted March 20, 2020 (edited) I am inexperienced, and not yet posted here on OCRemixed, so take my advice with a grain of salt. First, I would like to say I like the tune, but I ask if the pumping starting at about 40 seconds, is it intentional? I'm not listening on optimal stuff right now, perhaps I'm hearing incorrectly:) Edited March 20, 2020 by Audiomancer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhonicB∞m Posted March 20, 2020 Author Share Posted March 20, 2020 5 minutes ago, Audiomancer said: I am inexperienced, and not yet posted here on OCRemixed, so take my advice with a grain of salt. First, I would like to say I like the tune, but I ask if the pumping starting at about 40 seconds, is it intentional? I'm not listening on optimal stuff right now, perhaps I'm hearing incorrectly:) Yeah, the bass doesn't kick in for a while. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ordonis Posted March 30, 2020 Share Posted March 30, 2020 I love it! I can absolutely hear this on Radio Cutman or some other station of the like. I was going to mention the mids getting kinda muddy about halfway through the track, but then I noticed the second version appears to have cleaned those up pretty well. I'd absolutely love to hear this with a sax solo in the middle, hope that works out. Well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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