OverCoat Posted June 14, 2007 Share Posted June 14, 2007 http://soundtempest.net/soc/single/oc-brokendolls.mp3 I forgot what kind of music you call this. Well, it's kind of dark and depressing, but what do I make that isn't? haev funz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickenwarlord Posted June 14, 2007 Share Posted June 14, 2007 I think it has a bit too much echo and trailing on that open little drag. Relaxed drums fit well and phase out when not needed. Those little entrances at 2:08 trail off a little sloppily, but not too badly. I'm not a fan of the large time with the stuttering. Bah, that was a fairly negative review. There were some good ideas in there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OverCoat Posted June 14, 2007 Author Share Posted June 14, 2007 Bah, that was a fairly negative review. There were some good ideas in there. ok! thanks for the review Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PlastikBag Posted June 14, 2007 Share Posted June 14, 2007 Hey, I thought it was pretty cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OverCoat Posted June 14, 2007 Author Share Posted June 14, 2007 Actually I think I might extend this tune a little bit you can all have the short version for now :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OverCoat Posted June 20, 2007 Author Share Posted June 20, 2007 Check the link again in the first post [same url]. It's got about 20 more seconds tacked on to the end, because I brought the drums in again. I felt like that's long enough. I can't seem to make any longer tunes in Renoise so far Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martin Penwald Posted June 20, 2007 Share Posted June 20, 2007 Hm, I don't really like the way you start the song off; it kinda sounds like a nerve-shattering version of Jean-Michel Jarre style. It gets better at 1:02, though, once the drums come in. Makes it more...whole or something. Nice breakdown section from 2:03, pretty atmospheric stuff here. Ending: pretty good stuff from 3:35 on; again, the sound which is used from the end of the breakdown up until 3:35 is a little too psycho for me. Or maybe it's just too loud. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Shadow Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 hey sup just checking in you know how i am with your musix Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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