Broken Dolls - little ambient groove

[OverCoat]

http://soundtempest.net/soc/single/oc-brokendolls.mp3

I forgot what kind of music you call this. Well, it's kind of dark and depressing, but what do I make that isn't? haev funz

[Chickenwarlord]

I think it has a bit too much echo and trailing on that open little drag. Relaxed drums fit well and phase out when not needed.

Those little entrances at 2:08 trail off a little sloppily, but not too badly.

I'm not a fan of the large time with the stuttering.

Bah, that was a fairly negative review. There were some good ideas in there.

[OverCoat]

Bah, that was a fairly negative review. There were some good ideas in there.

ok! thanks for the review

[PlastikBag]

Hey, I thought it was pretty cool.

[OverCoat]

Actually I think I might extend this tune a little bit

you can all have the short version for now :3

[OverCoat]

Check the link again in the first post [same url]. It's got about 20 more seconds tacked on to the end, because I brought the drums in again. I felt like that's long enough. I can't seem to make any longer tunes in Renoise so far

[Martin Penwald]

Hm, I don't really like the way you start the song off; it kinda sounds like a nerve-shattering version of Jean-Michel Jarre style. It gets better at 1:02, though, once the drums come in. Makes it more...whole or something.

Nice breakdown section from 2:03, pretty atmospheric stuff here.

Ending: pretty good stuff from 3:35 on; again, the sound which is used from the end of the breakdown up until 3:35 is a little too psycho for me. Or maybe it's just too loud.

[Red Shadow]

hey sup just checking in

you know how i am with your musix