Lovin' that kick. It just grabs me in with how much meat it has. I do like the direction it tends to take, too, with those talking synths when it gets to Metaton-EX, and the fast pacing. Great approach to this, in general.
I'd look into cleaning up your reverb, though. While it allows the instruments to fill the space, it's creating a lot of mud in the track, making everything crowd too much in general. Once you clean up the reverb, look to see that the mix itself doesn't crowd the mix too much, as well.
That's the biggest thing that you need to look for - reverb and mixing. Keep it up!