Hey all.
This is gonna be relatively quick, because I wasn't sure if I'd present it or try to rework it again yet, but. . .
SUBMITTED, MASTERED SONG:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ixEWhVdIC-Xj1y5YevPlgwfW9hTDTgYF/view?usp=sharing
ORIGINAL DECISION:
SOURCE TRACKS:
Shinobi III: Return of the Ninja Master - "Inner Darkside"
Rise of the Robots - "Prime 8 / The Builder's Stage"
REFERENCE TRACKS:
The Glitch Mob (Aesthetics / Vibe / Asian & Ethnic Influences)
Mike Oldfield - "Tubular Bells (Theme from 'The Exorcist')"
'Theme from the X-Files'
I uhm...don't entirely know what to do to resolve the critique points for this track arrangement-wise. *Mixing* I might be able to grasp on, but the basses are hell, and I need to find a way to rhythmically marry the two sources together better? Or--at the very least--the main issues I took from it are: 1) too much going on that sounds fuzzy, and 2) there's not enough variation on the main motif. . .and I guess the sources are very strange / weird / wack...etc.
Any comments or questions or concerns would be great to discuss here and ask. ♥ I'm open to any ideas on how to redress this or...whatever. I'd hope maybe the way the song is built is alright, and maybe it's just the elements within in that are problematic and can be resolved for the better.