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  1. Opens up with a conservative, but beautiful sound upgrade. Whoa, changes up at :31 into synthwave-type stuff, but the mixing's very muddy, coupled with a piercing lead line. It'll sound like I don't understand the genre convention with this mixing; I'm with this arrangement style, but the sound is too indistinct, IMO. At 1:36, a countermelodic synth gets added in that's bouncing around the stereo field, but it's mixed in such a way that it barely registers; I'm mainly picking up on it because I was in active listening, waiting for something about the textures to change up; I could see a casual listener not noticing that supporting part was there, not noticing a meaningful difference. Same with the different countermelody from 1:55-2:27, which registers more but was still functionally buried here. At 2:27, we got a cut-and-paste of 1:36's section; 2:47 repeated 1:55, 3:50 repeated 2:27. I was waiting for something to change up the dynamics of the piece and wasn't getting it. Right now, the groove gets established, the genre adaptation is there, and then there aren't any new/major ideas introduced after 1:55; the groove coasts along, the patterns don't change up. Once you get to 1:55, you've heard the entirely of the ideas; this approach does mimic the repeating structure of the original song, so it's not inherently wrong. It should go without saying that all VGM arrangements aren't required to be hugely interpretive (or made with OCR in mind), and can be appreciated for what they are. At OCR, we're looking for a further level of development and personalization beyond the genre adaptation though. I really enjoyed the concept of beefing this theme up in a chillwave style, Jon Paul. It's a strong source tune choice and a strong cover. I did say at the start that the mixing sounded too muddy; while I would like to hear that adjusted some for a less washed out sound, I could still approve a super interpretive and developed arrangement with the mixing done this way. IMO, some combination of refining the mixing and developing more writing ideas and variations for dynamic contrast for the arrangement side would make this more likely to be approved for OCR's arrangement standards. If you're open to revisiting this, see what more you can do, otherwise, I'm definitely hoping you'll continue submitting arrangements and adding more of your musical personality and interpretation into them. NO (resubmit)
  2. Hello, Here is a new Elrinth & PsyNES collab remix, it has been a long time since the previous one! If this gets submitted to the site, it will be an OCReMix exclusive, never released anywhere else! Probably later on my youtube/soundcloud too, but not in a while. Contact Information Your ReMixer name - PsyNES Your real name - Jari Your email address - Your website - https://soundcloud.com/psynes Your userid - 20309 Submission Information Name of game(s) arranged - Mega Man 2 Name of arrangement - A Breath of Fresh Air Name of individual song(s) arranged - Air Man Stage Your own comments about the mix, for example the inspiration behind it, how it was made, etc. This remix was started by Elrinth back in 2013 I think. Elrinth made a really good start for the remix and I thought we could finish this pretty quickly... but here we are, 10 years later We had big plans back then, but all fell apart I guess. We were supposed to make a Mega Man 2 remix album, and I was planning to do a Mega Man 3 remix album myself (both may still happen, but who knows when). Sadly the collaborations work got slower and slower for various reasons and in the last few years it's been only me trying to finish the unfinished remixes we started and this is one of them. In the intro part there's some double dragon mixed in there by Elrinth, but not enough to actually take over the airman-part. It also comes back later around the 2 minute mark. I think the first version of the remix Elrinth sent to me was already like 2 mins long. After that it's been mostly me remixing the tune, adding effects and length etc. There were a few times Elrinth still added some stuff, but can't really remember what. The 04:40+ part is actually taken from my first PsyNES Mega Man 2 Air Man remix that I made back in 2009! Holy poop, it's been a long time. Elrinth just actually said that it's his favorite part of the remix. Oh well, that was some comments and history about the song/our collaborations. Hope you all enjoy the tune! Love from Elrinth and PsyNES! Renoise still rocks
  3. Resub from a form rejection in 2015 -LT Hi, Here is a resubmit of this old remix. "Fun fact" the name of the remix is a pun of "The Large Hadron Collider", I don't know if anyone has catched that, should probably just change it. The arrangement hasn't changed that much from the previous version, but I hope it still passes. I think mixing stuff has improved a lot or either I am really bad at mixing and deaf. - Jari
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  5. It's capably put together and there's some inherent personalization in performing it, though not a ton in the big picture. There's some more personalization with some of the additive ornamentation and guitar flourishes in the 2:08 section. 2:40 loops the intro material for the close. Yeah, MW's right that this is essentially a same-tempo cover with rock instrumentation. Agreed that it sounds good; it does need further aspects of interpretation involved for OCR's arrangement standards. Good for what it is; if there's openness to further developing this, Matt, we're all ears. NO (resubmit)
  6. Greg's wind accents here were a beautiful touch for the intro. I didn't really get any "Phendrana Drifts" vibes from this at all, not that I minded. To me, the fadeout ending, including the direction of Sirenstar's vocals, felt unresolved; while it could have had another measure to give more finality to this it wasn't a big deal. Overall, you get some familiar sounds coupled with a good rise in the energy level here compared to the original piece. YES
  7. Ramped up at :45 and the soundscape felt kind of distant, lacking some highs; nothing holding this back, as it's going for a darker, synthwave-inspired style, even if I do like my sharpness. Very cool fusion of the themes; if you weren't familiar with these themes, you'd assume there was only one source tune with the way everything connected so seamlessly together. I particularly enjoyed the guitar work throughout, which added loads of herbs and spices here. Nice job, team! I love team! EDIT (10/23): Had no problems with the previous version, and this one sounds good too. YES
  8. How very un-Western this Gunman Clive source is. Alright, that caught me off guard, not gonna lie. Mega Man/"Get a Weapon"-style blips at :11? Alright, that caught me off guard, not gonna lie. Nothing's making sense around here. Brass from 1:12-1:18 was a slight weak link in terms of realism, though the way it danced around the stereo field was a nice touch that also mitigated the realism issues. A ding against the strings in here (e.g. 2:49-3:00) as well. Nice job taking those opening riffs from the original and keeping them in play for most of the first 2/3rds, which also kept the solo section grounded in some reference to the original. Awesome rock/synth fusion by jnWake & minusworld that brought entirely new dimensions to this source tune! YES
  9. Loads of fun dynamic contrast, and I was impressed by the different styles that arose from the different sections of the title theme. String sequencing from 1:46-2:07, 2:53-3:21 & 4:31-4:52 exposed the sample too much, the attacks and sustains are suss :-D; pretty much any time that sample was present (though less of an issue at 1:46 due to the lower volume), there was a quality disparity with the other strong instrumentation. The only chink in the armor here. Aside from that, you can just sit and listen to the bass, the drums, the guitars, the piano, whatever you want to fixate on, and enjoy the detail work behind everything. This never stays in one place too long; interesting changeups at 3:32 & 4:52 in particular. So much strong musicianship on display here from TheMan, Zach & Joe! YES
  10. ReMixer Name: Pixels & Paradiddles, Hemophiliac Real Name(s): Seph and Josh Brown Email Address: Game Arranged: Final Fantasy VII, Final Fantasy IV Name of Arrangement: Psycho Giant Names of Individual Songs Arranged: Crazy Motorcycle Chase, Within the Giant Link to Submission: (.mp3) (.wav) Comments: Submitted for Round 1 of DarkeSword's Game-Set-Mash!! Final Fantasy arrangement competition, pitting Team SNES vs Team PSX to mash together a source from the SNES era Final Fantasy titles and a source from the PSX era titles. This week paired "Within the Giant" from FFIV with "Crazy Motorcycle Chase" from FFVII. Seph and I leaned hard on our symphonic metal approach for this one, taking inspiration from ...And Justice for All era Metallica (sans the inaudible bass) and contemporary Mastodon. Hemophiliac contributed an organ riff transitioning the A section of "Within the Giant" into the A section of "Crazy Motorcycle Chase." Conceptually, we married a scene BGM from one game with a cutscene/minigame BGM from the other and turned them into an epic battle sequence. May the best mix win for the compo, but in the meantime, thanks again for checking out our work! ~Paradiddles (Josh)
  11. Wouldn't have thought to put these two pieces together, so I love the compo idea promoting other unique concepts like this. Exotic strings at :59. What can I say while listening through other than that this is a smart arrangement with polished performances. Will vote for you this one time. YES
  12. Opens up ultra-conservatively but tastefully presented; I'd argue that if it stays like that, there should be more aspects of interpretation involved, but we'll see where it goes. Something about the mixing of the vocals is not working here either; they sound too muffled, which starts to be more noticeable around :58, and is very apparent by 1:08; what happened to any high-end sharpness? I'm going to ignore the ESL nature of the sampled vocals' lyrics; others hearing non-native vocalists in other language may harp on that, but not do so for languages they don't know. The tone of the vocals is really nice though, and I really liked that flourish from 2:01-2:25, along with the subtle countermelodic writing underneath it (not the staccato strings). The drums brought at 1:45 sounded so dry compared to the rest of the instrumentation though; they felt very stapled on top with 0 synergy. Bowed strings underlying the vocals from 2:01-2:50 (then back again from 3:15-3:43) were bone dry and exposed the fakeness of the sample; need some wetness to the sound to give it some body and mitigate the realism issues. Electric guitar first used from 2:25-2:51 had a decent tone, but very mechanical timing that hugely exposed the sample and broke the immersion; same with the grungier guitar from 3:15-3:42, and the guitar leading from 3:42-4:00, it all sounded way too rigid with the timing. Even the brief choir vox at 4:07, the way the notes changed sounded very mechanical. The strings ending it at 4:15 were more emotive though. I really enjoy the concept; this presentation isn't as cohesive as others. There's too many parts in place where the production TLC hasn't been applied to glue these parts together as a unified-sounding performance; they often didn't sound like they were sharing the same space; some parts were more spacious and distant, others upfront and dry, and then we had rigid timing with some parts, as the guitar and vox timing toward the end should be better humanized. If you can refine several of these smaller issues that are adding up, I can get behind it; great potential here and I do enjoy it more and more as I loop it. This feels like a situation where the arrangement is in place and just needs the final production and mixing polish; you may need some time away from it to have fresh ears on how the parts sound, but, no matter what, I'd say don't give up on it; I definitely want to see this posted in some form. NO (resubmit)
  13. Contact Information Username: H36T UserID:37144 Website: https://www.youtube.com/@H36TRemasters Submission Information Arrangement Game: Final Fantasy VIII Name of Arrangement: Kiyomi Song Being Arranged: The Salt Flats Hello there, back with another submission from FFVIII. I really should have tried to go for the big album but oh well! Anywho, here is a song from a not so popular track, a track I don't even have a great love for in "The Salt Flats." I can't exactly recall why I started working on this song but it probably had to do with how minimal it is. Knowing myself, I saw a palette to work with and began to juxtapose my vision on top of it. What is that vision anyway? Well it brings me to the title Kiyomi. I'll spare you the Japanese lesson but Kiyome no Shio or Kiyomejio is the word for purifying salt. The pure part is also sometimes used in spelling Kiyomi--a girl's name in Japan. For me this song evolved into an image of earth, who I've named Kiyomi, and her being purified from all that's been done to her. Some sort of mystic, powerful force that triggers wide spread eradication of danger when it senses things have gone too far. Sort of invokes FFVII vibes rather than FFVIII. With that metaphor in mind the song goes through phases of a calm that has this essence of gloom. Then erupting into different phases of energy and finally ending on a feeling that is a bit uncertain as to how things will turn out. I think trying to use different instruments while remaining cohesive was probably the hardest part. I've had some feedback about some funky chords here and there but I couldn't think of alternatives and I liked it personally so I stuck with that as well. Other than that, this was a journey for me to make and I'm curious if I was able to send people on one as well. Until next time! Harlem, out!
  14. Contact Information: Your ReMixer Name: The Vodoú Queen (ft. Zack Parrish, Aeroprism/Sébastien & Xaleph/Matt Sabol) Your Real Name: Angélique Vodoú Your Email Address: Your Website: https://thevodouqueen.newgrounds.com/ Your User ID # on our forums: 37001 Submission Information: Name of Game(s) Arranged: Final Fantasy IV (SNES) & Final Fantasy VII (PS1) Name of Arrangement: "Mechanical Delights (NeverEnding Love Mix)" Name of Individual Song(s) Arranged: 'Within the Giant' & 'Crazy Motorcycle Chase' Additional information about game including composer, system, etc. (if it has not yet been added to the site): 1. FINAL FANTASY IV OST; Track 42 - Within the Giant; Artist(s): Nobuo Uematsu; Release Date: June 14, 1991; Label: Square Co./NTT Publishing 2. FINAL FANTASY VII OST; Track 22 (Disc 1) - The Chase / Crazy Motorcycle; Artist(s): Nobuo Uematsu, Minoru Akao; Release Date: February 10, 1997; Label: DigiCube Link to the original soundtrack (if it is not one of the sound archives already available on the site): 1. https://finalfantasy.fandom.com/wiki/Original_soundtracks_of_Final_Fantasy_IV 2. https://finalfantasy.fandom.com/wiki/Final_Fantasy_VII:_Original_Soundtrack Your own comments about the mix, for example the inspiration behind it, how it was made, etc.: ---- Contributions: The Vodoú Queen -- arrangement, synths, electronica drums, vocals, SFX, mixing, mastering, production Aeroprism -- arrangement Zack Parrish -- lead guitar & metal drums Xaleph -- harmonic guitar & rhythm guitar COLLABORATORS [FEAT.]: Zack Parrish = *Live Lead (Clean & Overdriven) Guitars, *Live Rhythm Guitars, *High-Octane Metal Drums (for 'Crazy Motorcycle' Interlude), *Snares, *Additional Arrangement Material for Key Change / Outro Sections, *MIDI Clean-Up & Post-Production Guidance / Assistance / Corrections, *Mastering Limiter ADDITIONAL ACCOLADES & CONTRIBUTIONS: Aeroprism / Seb -- for some of the original arrangement and composition of the pads and bass-structure. Both have been heavily modified and I know he doesn't feel like this piece "represents his [part of the] work" anymore, due to the number of changes and iterations to the tracks, but his collaboration with me during GSM, Round 1 was essential, inspirational, and I appreciate both his efforts and his patience whilst making the beats. Xaleph / Matt -- for his takes of the distorted and rhythmic guitars for the CM Section in the original incarnation of this remix, during GSM, and also for his advice with mixing and producing. He did those original recordings in such a short amount of time for me, when it was down to the wire before final submission, and his enthusiasm is always infectious. I admire his production skills and versatility with various forms of EDM and Heavy Metal. Also, shout-out to the GSM 1 FF SNES crew/gang. Go Team LockeNES! WOO! ♥ And to our opponents, as well, Team PSX--for keeping us on our toes and forcing us to step-up our game. ...In the end, I learned it wasn't about the polls and statistics, but the friends and journey made along the way. Also-also, super ecstatic and glad that I finally got to do a remix of one of my favorite songs from my favorite Final Fantasy game, IV. # <\\: WELCOME TO EBLAN INDUSTRIES, TERMINAL NUMBER: 190791. . . PLEASE HOLD ON TIGHT. FASTEN YOUR SEATBELTS, AND KEEP ALL APPENDAGES INSIDE THE VEHICLE AT ALL TIMES. THANK YOU FOR CHOOSING US AS YOUR TRANSPORT TODAY. . . ...WE HOPE YOU ENJOY THE я1đ3. ://>
  15. I wasn't familiar with the sources, so I had to take some time to wrap my head around them and fully follow the arrangement. It's mostly the different sections of "Grasswalk", with the appearances of "Demonstration Mini-game" at :47, "Loonboon" at 2:33, and "Final Wave" at 2:58. I did also hear the influence of "Wave 1" from the unofficial, fan-made PvZ2 Reflourished expansion soundtrack during the swing section. Great transformation into an 8-bit chiptune, with careful attention to varying the different NES-style sounds. I actually wasn't put off by the instrumentation sounding samey; if you're familiar with NES sound combinations, this is extremely varied, especially by not holding to standard NES channel limitations. This isn't a mere demake, it's a full-on interpretive arrangement with some extra themes woven in. The limited mixing was the "weak" point here, but the sound's authentic and the arrangement's fantastically spirited. Very nice job, Blixer, welcome aboard! YES
  16. :00-1:33.5 (bassline from 1:14-1:32 of source; plus melodic arrangement I recognized from :13.5-:18.75, :20.5-:35.5), 1:33.5-1:53.5, 1:55.5-1:57.5, 1:58.5-2:11.5, 2:13.5-2:25.5, 2:33-4:06.5 (drums), 4:06.5-4:33.25 (drums & melody) The opening guitar chugs that are at the foundation of the piece derived from the bassline from 1:14 to 1:32 of the source, which carried all the way until the chorus was referenced at 1:33. 1:33's section was shrill, but I'll live. I may be underplaying other references 2:33-4:06, as I didn't recognize any of the melodies being used anywhere, so I'd love a judge's or Lucas's clarification there. It's not the way I would have preferred to reference the source most heavily, but in concert with the melodic references, it's alright. Not my cup of tea, but capably done, so no worries about me not being the target demo. YES
  17. Halloooo. This is based on two tracks from Metroid Prime: Hunters (2006). 1) Minor Enemy Encounter 2) Guardians Battle Theme This arrangement is called Bounty Gunner. My artist name is Tachy Bunker https://youtube.com/Anuman 38707-tachy-bunker - Tachy
  18. I could listen to "Memoria" all day but not really remember the melody well, and I'm not sure why, whereas "Edgar and Sabin" is hugely memorable for me. Regardless of my source tune opining, I enjoy the fusion here! Percussion brought in from 1:09-1:37 & 2:38-2:52 somehow felt underwhelming; not a big deal, but something felt missing there. I did like the one percussion part from 1:37-1:57 though; didn't know what it was, but the sound was unique, as well as the placement in the soundscape. This was a good example of giving "E&S" a darker edge, and the tradeoffs with "Memoria" flowed very well. Cool instrumentation throughout, and solid dynamics. You could argue things were getting too cramped from 3:06-3:37 for the big finish, and some parts were feeling obscured, but the textures were full and I could make out the distinct part-writing well. Nice energy here! YES
  19. ReMixer name: ZackParrish Real name: Zack Parrish Email: Website: zackparrish.com User ID: 29013 Name of game: Final Fantasy 6 & Final Fantasy 9 Name of arrangement: "Heads or Tails" Name of song: "Edgar and Sabin" (FF6) & "Place of Memory - Memoria Theme" (FF9) Composers: Nobuo Uematsu Link to track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=02jw5lkM638 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yFfMzqAMOsI Comments: Did this one for Darkesword's Game Set Smash competition. Was interesting making the two themes play together but wasn't too challenging since it just ... kind of worked bouncing them off one another. Memoria makes a great counter to E&S, and the opening 'melody' of Memoria also has the same interval pattern that E&S plays over and over again, so those two bits worked quite nicely together as well. Was quite a challenge throwing this together but managed to do it in 3 days.
  20. Arranger's handle is Death by Accident, so arrangement would need a unique title if passed -LT Hi my name is Adrian, I have as a hobby to make remixes of video game themes. Some one recommended me to sent it in this web site, i sent you one of my works. I have more mixes to share, but first i want to study your web site to kwon how is it works. Thanks
  21. In my defense... I am putting in the effort to fix issues with these before submitting. Whoever mastered this album let the peaks go over 0dB ReMixer name: ZackParrish Real name: Zack Parrish Email: Website: zackparrish.com User ID: 29013 Performers: My computer Name of game: Super Smash Bros. Brawl Name of arrangement: En Garde Name of song: Online Practice Stage Composers: Not a clue who wrote this... Link to track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oz3YN5Vy1ik Comments: Took a 20 second loop and turned it into 3 minutes of ...whatever this is. Hodge podge of chip, guitars, trumpet and whatever else I used. I don't remember anything about producing it because it's been several years since then. Was part of the Harmony of Heroes album.
  22. The track was 5:11-long, so I needed to identify the source tune in play for at least 155.5 seconds for the VGM to be considered dominant in the arrangement: :02-1:20, 1:39.5-1:58.5, 2:17.75-3:44.25, 4:22.75-4:41.75 = 202.5 second or 65.11% overt source usage There could be more that I was overlooking and undercounting. I just timed it out to map out what I recognized at first blush and not overlook the level of source usage while being bowled over by this musicianship. Weird lil' blip of sorts around 2:07 when the cymbal gets muted in an abrupt way; very minor thing. Great performances, strong energy, very intense peaks, excellent dynamic contrast throughout, loads of changes in the lead guitar tones to provide variety, and the treatment of the source tune was excellent. If you need pro-grade official arrange album quality stuff, call Mauricio. Incredible work! YES
  23. Kidding... I don't have that many tracks up my sleeve... Nor would I submit some of them... ReMixer name: ZackParrish Real name: Zack Parrish Email: Website: zackparrish.com User ID: 29013 Performers: Psamathes - Vocals Harp - Harpsibored Cello & 2nd Harp - Chromatic Apparatus Name of game: Metroid Prime 3 Corruption Name of arrangement: An Endless Sleep Name of song: Skytown Composers: Kenji Yamamoto (I), Masaru Tajima, Minako Hamano Link to track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7P7jdnU06ew Comments: Wrote this as part of the album Harmony of a Hunter Returns. Wasn't a huge fan of the source track but the director REALLY wanted it on the album and nobody was staking a claim pretty far into the production of the album... so I took charge and worked on this track. Director also really wanted to use Harpsibored and Chromatic Apparatus for their harping abilities and having never worked with a harpist before.. and having a sudden change to work with two of them... I write two harp parts as a ... sort of duet. I then did my usual thing stacking orchestral bits and bobs, atmospheric mumbo jumbo, a choir, etc... ultimately put a cello part in there when I found out Chrom also played the cello(Ace fellow that one)... and then the director yet again convinced me to use ANOTHER person and put me in touch with Psamathes so I swapped out the fake choir with her voice on... several tracks. She didn't disappoint and gave the track some much needed life in the second half. Eventually I decided why not add some acoustic guitar as well, so took out the guit and recorded a couple of parts being Psam's vocals. I'm sorry to all 3 of them for not submitting this sooner... they did awesome and I can't thank them enough for their contributions.
  24. hello, This is my submission. Thanks OD Link to my submission : Re Mixer : Onirik Dreamer real name : Karim Ajroud email : website : https://onirikdreamer.com https://www.youtube.com/@Onirikdreamer Link of vidéoclip : user id : 38210 Name of game arranged : Metroid (Nintendo Nes) Name of original track : main theme (Hirokazu Tanaka credited as Hip Tanaka) Name of my track : Samus legend Additional information about game : Nintendo (1986) Link to the original soundtrack : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M-U3sVX2G3w Your own comments about the mix : I love this piece and I wanted to add electronic and dynamic, cool and energic touch to it, i hope you like it.
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