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Chickenwarlord

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  1. The rainstick sound is a little too present methinks. First synth is a little hollow sounding, but it's not too bad.

    Second time you echo that little theme halfway through doesn't really fit well, but I understand why it's there.

    I have the feeling that this should be more dynamically varied.

    Near the end the high notes ringing is a tad distracting (ergh, I need to find a better word).

    Still well done, just a few touch-up issues. After all, I am only one person, and this will most likely appeal more to others.

  2. Sorry DjP I just can't get into your voice very well.

    I like the acoustic guitar and the mellow feel, but the vocals just turn me off.

    No, not the lyrics, the actual vocals. It sounds like Garrison Keillor: someone who likes to sing but can't do a very good job of it. It certainly isn't horrible, but I wouldn't want to listen to it more than once.

  3. Blah... I listened to this on my IPod whilst playing Chemical Plant Zone, so that my parents wouldn't yell at me to turn the sound down. I have to say, while I like the original, I think the volumes and emphasis are just a tad off in this incarnation. I can't put my finger on it, but there is one instrument that just doesn't belong in this mix.

    I like the bouncy feel of the original a bit more.

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