Overall, this does not sound bad, but there are some problems.
First off, I really am not feeling the beat. This may be because I'm one for big beats and cool grooves, but I'm not feelin' it.
Also, that bass (the low frequency in the EQ, mainly) has got to come up. I'm also one who loves dat bass.
From 0:06 to 0:14, the vibraphone or whatever that is doesn't work. Its chord changes are coming in before the other chord changes coming from the other instruments, and it just sounds a little weird.
Keep it up, though. This sounds interesting.