Err: Argh! Overflow
Meh. I was actually happy with my own version of this. Besides... there's no need to be this specific, is there? This really verges on a walkthrough. It's very clear and easy to read, but it's also a bit too comprehensive, imho.
I mean... thanks for trying, but I think this wasn't really necessary. Why don't you try polishing the bios instead of re-writing them, by the way? I mean, some of them might as well be re-written (like my Doom Guy bio), but most of them are ok, save for some odd sentence here and there.
I really appreciate your efforts, but I think your time would be more wisely spent improving the bios instead of replacing them. Even though - and I might as well say this out loud - your bios are probably the best written around here, it'll be no fun if you're the one who wrote them ALL. Like you said, you won't mind if you leave your revisions out, but then again, doing so would also mean you're wasting your time, and that's not what I want.
I'm also sorry for not doing anything useful lately. I have this ball of string with knots on it and I need to prioritize the knots that are forming around my neck before I start with the ones around... other body parts. ...Nevermind, bad metaphor.