Protricity
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hehe, reverb pulsation! That’s an interesting effect with an interesting affect.
Interesting and moody, but way too short and minimal to work. Would be great if, at the 2:30 mark or some point, a more established guitar melody came around. Just an idea.
Please do something more with this. Its well done, and almost enough for a yes.
NO
Furthermore, its a direct transcript of the original, so says the author, and so would say anyone who listens to the spc.
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HEY LARY I FORGOT TO THANK U FOR PLAYING MY SONG MIDWAY MELTDOWN I WAS WANTING 4 MANY PEOPLE 2 HEER IT CAUZE AFTER ALL ITS MY SONG AND I MADE IT< IHOP EVARYONE ENJOYED IT CAUSEZE LIKE ALL PROTOIERCIITY SONGSZ AR GR8 RITE YEP NOTHING BUT HIGH KWALITIE PROTOTOIRIERRYRR MUIZIUK ON VGFAGUENCY EVARY SATUARDAY OR WUTEVAR
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WHAT THE HELL?
Vig and Analoq voted yes and MALCOS VOTED NO??????????????
WTF IS GOING ON???????
Yea, some of the piano is off key, but its largly stylistic.
Cant see how this isn't YES
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This song is rather short, plays the original melody through 3 times, and then ends.
Go for more rearrangement. Dont just rehash on the original.
I like it though.
NO
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My only issue here is based on how the song follows the original exactly and then when the more complicated parts of the original come about, they are pretty much skipped.
Like the sounds, but go for more of a rearrangement, and less remix.
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The percussion is pretty grating. Bad drumloops? Sound effects are just way too loud. Dont really know another way to put it - the sounds in this song are annoying. Go for more originality as well.
NO
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I would that the bass was more prominent. Its there, but cuts out too soon, not enough sustain. Kinda gives the guitar a hollow sound. Some parts seem awkward and messy. Kinda disappointed that I didn't get to hear any crazy ass zyko solos.
Other than that, very interesting piece. Over the top rearrangement and creativity. Very likeable.
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Jim Holland is almost as inspiring as fowl jive. I hope Jim Holland becomes a regular on the show.
Eh, I liked djp's surprise call better. I really wouldn't guess dave lloyd sounded like that. I thought he was 24 or something. Kinda strange how things can be...
I also expected a little more seriousness out of the creator of oc.
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HOLY CRAP IM ON TEH AIR ANC CRUD CAN U HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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This is your one time opportunity to hear some random fag from the west coast ramble about video game nonsense. DONT MISS OUT
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Find the song here:
http://briefcase.yahoo.com/crheath@sbcglobal.net/ , UnknownProductions, and download the file called 'A Storm in the Desert'. Title is 'A Storm in the Desert'. Wow, repetitive.
Thanks for your time, guys.
~Ty
AoP - A Storm in the Desert .mp3 4226 KB 2-Dec-2003
AoP2 - The Bottom of the Lake .mp3 4426 KB 14-Feb-2004
AoP3 - Traveling the Woods .mp3 4002 KB 14-Feb-2004
AoP4 - Shadows Left by Time .mp3 4894 KB 17-Feb-2004
Dragon Warrior - Kingdom Come .mp3 4262 KB 18-Jun-2003
FF3 - Esper of Legend .mp3 3422 KB 12-Jul-2003
FF7 - Drums in the Deeps .mp3 2898 KB 31-Jul-2003
FF7 - The Battle for Corel .mp3 3028 KB 12-Jul-2003
Golden Eye 007 Ocean's Orchest .mp3 2840 KB 12-Jul-2003
IMC 16 - Gig at the Fair .mp3 3220 KB 20-Sep-2003
IMC 17 - Ancient Legends .mp3 3370 KB 15-Nov-2003
IMCLE - ThatsaSpicySnowball .mp3 3034 KB 30-Jul-2003
Once Upon a Time in Mexico .mp3 3902 KB 20-Jan-2004
Paper Mario - ShyGuyRaveParty .mp3 3952 KB 12-Jul-2003
Pirates of Dragon Roost Isle .mp3 3400 KB 2-Oct-2003
file name turns out to be AoP+-+A+Storm+in+the+Desert.mp3
I see nothing in the email that leads me to think this song is called 'storm rifted sky'. Someone just made a mistake. Someone who's name starts with Dave Lloyd.
So yea, I got the new song and am listening to it. I'll have to hear it again when I get home to review it.
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Soundscape or not, its the biggest violation of the submission guidlines we've had for a while now.
Its a clear NO and I'm not sure where the YESs are comming from.
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eradicate+fromghostsemergebeastsupdate.mp3
I'm sure I got the right one. Its lo fi as all hell and damnation.
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Hehe, interesting way to remix this one. Sounds like some pretty cheap soundfonts here. Well used.
Great variation on the original. Great instrumentation.
We wants it, my precious, o yes we does.
YES
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whoa.. lofi. Mono.
Like the guitar, but whats the deal with the lack of upper register frequencies? Everything is muffled.
Everything is well done about this mix except the lofi sound quality and lack of stereo.
Please fix these problems and resubmit. PLZ!?? Its really good stuff.
NO
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Lightwarmth presents something light and warm here.
I like it and find no problems whatsoever. Could be longer and use some more uh... complexity perhaps.
I always dig stuff that constantly changes. All the time changing. Thats the high point in this mix for sure.
Doesnt sound like it was played live, but skillfully done nonetheless.
Ending could be better.
YES
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Oh man. The original of this song sucked SOOOOOOO MUCH.
HA! This is so cool!
Man, talk about taking a total piece of shit and making something sweet ass out of it.
Really impressed here.
YES YES YES
Could be louder, but nice. Yes.. nice.
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I just really have no idea where the hell i'd get the original to this.
Maybe someone has some ideas? as for now, just straight up review:
Some repeating, but lots of variation. Most importantly, the instrumentation is well done. Beats are pretty simple, but in the right place. Everything fits. Light on the ears and fun to listen to.
YES unless someone gives a valid reason why this shouldn't pass.
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Review thrown out.
This song gets a
LoL!!~
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Cool percussion. Sorta. Guitar and bass samples really do sound like their from the spc. Thats ok, I did that too
Big problem is this wishwash synth at 0:40. It clips, its too loud, out of place. Just wrong.
Strings sorta flood everything. They should use less reverb and release.
Interesting remix. Please fix the problems and resubmit.
NO
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Starting at :40 and up, the melody is way hollow. Lead over dnb. No real accompany until 1:00. Stuff like that is kinda grating.
Cool processing later one. Detuned saws kinda annoying. Theres clipping.
I really like the arrangement later on. The real problem here is that the instruments are somewhat floody. I never thought detuned saws were good for accompany like this.
This mix really could be better with more work. It needs to 'rock more'. Thats all I can really say. Its one step from oc quality. It needs that extra leap.
NO
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Indeed Darke is right. The synth is all by itself over the weak bass and drumloops. This continues for the entire duration of the song.
Really gotta go for more 'meat'.
Cool sound processing, but you need to go for your own beats and some better orchestration/arrangement.
NO
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Exactly as Darkesword put it.
My main problem here is the synths. I may be a little biased for not liking detuned synths in perticular, but layered detuned synths always sounded like shit to me. When things get layered up, I hear a great deal of frequency clashing. Things just get ugly. Cant really describe it anyway.
I would be willing to look past this if there were other elements of value and originality in this song, but its pretty much a straightforward trance song.
Just go for more next time.
NO
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Cant see that angle at all. This is top notch rearrangement. Excellent sound quality. Excellent everything.
Makes me happy to see this caliber being submitted to oc now and again.
YES
Really good job on the string synths. Couldn't imagine you wanting to change anything about this mix. Perhaps more length, thats about it.
GJ
*NO* Uninvited 'Haunted Mansion'
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Go for more complexity. This is minimal to the extreme. Rather similar to original.
For one thing, guitar shouldn't be played solo in quantized notes as such.
Its too green. work on the overall notation complexity.
NO