Poison - by DRAX

[Mordi]

Classic Commodore 64-tune composed by Thomas Mogensen.

Made in FL Studio 7.

Please leave a comment (for once).

Poison.mp3

[PhiJayy]

I usually don't take a liking towards this kind of music, and this is no exception.

However, arrangement and production (mostly) is solid, which makes it quite enjoyable. Well if I we're playing a video game. One flaw around :45 dealing with the lead synth, the pitch seems to have changed drastically. Making an off-key sound, see if you can fix that.

Thats about it. Overall I think you've managed to create a classic Commodore mix.

Nice work.

[Mordi]

Cool, thanks.

One flaw around :45 dealing with the lead synth, the pitch seems to have changed drastically. Making an off-key sound, see if you can fix that.

Not sure what you mean here. I can't make out what sounds is off-key. It might be that the pitch-bend of the lead sounds a bit off as it bends, I dont know. Maybe I should make it bend faster.

[PhiJayy]

Maybe I should make it bend faster.

Yeah exactly. There's certainly nothing wrong with changing the pitch. It just seemed a little too noticeable. Bending it faster would work just fine.

[Mordi]

Alright, I decided to get a hold of some better PAD's, so I went ahead and changed out most of the instruments used. Its totally different now. I think it sounds a bit better too.

[OverCoat]

Didn't you already cover Poison? I remember commenting on it

[Mordi]

I decided to try to make it better.

[jayc4life]

I quite enjoyed that actually. After listening to the original (which I wasn't familiar with) it 's pretty close to the real thing, well done with that.