djpretzel Posted September 20, 2003 Share Posted September 20, 2003 Email sub file cruising the great sea.mp3 -djp Hi - I'm new at this, so this is my first submission. I don't consider this track 'done' yet, but I did want to send it off to see if I was on the right track, and if this is something you'd want to post. If you have time to reply, I'd appreciate any tips you could give me. This is a remix of the tune that is played while sailing the great sea in Wind Waker. I slowed the tempo down a bit and went for a light, airy vibe. I don't have a 'remixer' name yet, but I usually go by robcat, so I guess that would work Thanks for your time! Rob Catalano robcatalano@hotmail.com - please CC any response to this address, the only reason I'm using AOL is because the file is too big for hotmail. :-s Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vig Posted September 22, 2003 Share Posted September 22, 2003 this is on the repetitive side. also, the trumpets sound very GM. my main problem with this mix is that it is underdeveloped. it doesnt go anywhere. just repeats the melody a couple of times. needs some more elaboration before i would bother going into the smaller technical details NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protricity Posted September 24, 2003 Share Posted September 24, 2003 This is extremely quiet. The percussions odd and not developed at all. The melody is simple and repeats. More needs to be done for this to get on oc. Work on arrangement, percussion element, and length. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malcos Posted September 28, 2003 Share Posted September 28, 2003 The drums on this are kinda strange. They would work for an intro, but not through the whole mix. The song doesn't go anywhere, and the melody just repeats. There were some parts where it seemed as if things were a little off time in the beginning, like the drums were on one groove and the brass was on another. Ending was non-existent. Too much silence on the end of the file. NO Basically what this needed to do was progress, it was just like a never ending beginning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
analoq Posted October 4, 2003 Share Posted October 4, 2003 you know, i like this one. but i agree for it to be on ocr it needs some improvement. like shave a minute or two off the track length. fewer repeitions, more changes (especially to the theme!). the ending is a good idea, just needs some polish. i hope to hear a resubmit. no Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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