Chernabogue Posted October 15, 2009 Posted October 15, 2009 Hey, I'm now making a Super Mario World track. It's a remix of the 'Castle BGM' only played with a pipe organ. Please comment and give me advises to make it better ! Quote
Spakku Posted October 16, 2009 Posted October 16, 2009 About the first half is new as far as I can figure. I'm not against adding some original tunes, but it's kind of too much all at once like that. (On the bright side, it sounds like Batman Returns.) It got a bit chaotic during the little fluttery segment, the pipe organ seems a bit unsuitable for a straight copy from the original tune. The ending was all right, but there should be a way cleaner transition from the source tune to the ending than mashing down all the keys at once. Quote
Chernabogue Posted October 17, 2009 Author Posted October 17, 2009 Update : Click here to listen to FR2.mp3 Please comment =) Quote
Spakku Posted October 18, 2009 Posted October 18, 2009 I think I heard a saxophone in the update... Quote
Rom Tom Posted October 18, 2009 Posted October 18, 2009 This should have a bit more reverb.. just a bit... And if this remix will be solely based on an organ playing, there should be more of a stereo presence, overall. Another part of this is that it should sound more like a human was playing it.. this is a little rigid. Good concept. Keep it going! Quote
BorgMan Posted October 20, 2009 Posted October 20, 2009 I'm notsure, but it sounds you're a bit off in the first part of the piece where you get into the main tune. You correct that later on, but all in all... it's a bit of a chaotic remake. I'm not actually sure if I like it or not... Quote
Spakku Posted October 20, 2009 Posted October 20, 2009 I'm pretty sure it's supposed to be off for effect. Quote
Strife89 Posted October 21, 2009 Posted October 21, 2009 I have no idea what the intro source is, but it sounds nice and very final-dungeony (Ganondorf's Castle, anyone? ). I can almost picture Ganondorf playing this as Mario plows through Bowser's Castle, both villains sitting in wait for the plumber's arrival. Much of the mix works quite well, but the ending is a bit abrupt. Fix that, and this track'll be a winner to my ears. Quote
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