djpretzel Posted April 10, 2004 Posted April 10, 2004 GAME: Bonk's Adventure 3 for TG16 CD ROM Song Remixed: Track03 (Level theme I think). Remixer: DJ Night Force 9 I'm not giving up on OCR. BEHOLD THE POWER OF SYTRUS!!
Protricity Posted April 12, 2004 Posted April 12, 2004 It just sounds way too amateur. Try to get good at percussion, notation, mastering. NO
analoq Posted April 12, 2004 Posted April 12, 2004 some cool fm sounds used poorly. this was only 4 minutes? felt like it lasted... much too long. insufficient escalation, climaxing, and other stuff to make it interesting oh yeah, drum sequencing is pretty bad. no
DarkeSword Posted April 13, 2004 Posted April 13, 2004 It seems to me that you don't really have an understanding of how percussion sounds work together to create a beat. The percussion is very boring... ...as is the rest of the mix. Sounds like Sytrus presets assigned to a MIDI file. I can't say if this is a MIDI rip or not, but the way it's arranged seems to indicate as much. Try to actually write an arrangement, rather than cutting, pasting, and rearranging. NO
Israfel Posted April 13, 2004 Posted April 13, 2004 Yeah, the others pretty much have this one covered. A bit too simplistic at this stage to pass. NO
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