TWEWY Rap Remix - Help Needed

[Mirby]

I can't rap, I can't arrange music, but I've had this idea for a remix of the track "It's So Beautiful" from The World Ends With You.

Here's the crappy WIP I made to demonstrate my idea:

http://www.box.net/shared/pmd3dkxkq9

Here's the lyrics I wrote.

~INTRO~

So you woke up here in the UG,

Intact, minus your entry fee,

When suddenly someone is erased,

So you flee with great haste...

~VERSE 1~

You meet someone and form a pact,

To insure your life if you're attacked,

By those symbols that they call Noise,

Full of power, strength, and ploys,

They come in many different shapes,

To cover you in oblivion's drapes,

You dash and dodge, bob and weave,

Until you win, so that they leave.

~CHORUS A~

Face, erase, hush and crush,

Noise in this Shibuya,

Face, erase, hush and crush,

G'bye Noise, hardly knew ya

~VERSE 2~

You find out the UG's a game,

And think that it is pretty lame,

You need to last seven days,

So you blast through Noise in a blaze,

Using psych pins left and right,

While your partner shows their might,

Now you're gaining levels and gaining power [Now you're playing with power!]

To give your foes a deadly shower!

~CHORUS B~

Face, erase, hush and crush,

This Noise that is pollution,

Face, erase, hush and crush,

That Noise is your solution,

~VERSE 3~

The Game Master's who you'll face,

And then proceed to fully erase,

So tell all Noise to mute, to hush,

While you go on and fully crush,

And listen to this beat and rhyme,

Neku, Shiki, Yoshiya, time,

Now all I have left to do,

Is say, ("The World Ends With You.")

~CHORUS A, then CHORUS B~

Face, erase, hush and crush,

{Subarashiki Kono Sekai},

Face, erase, hush and crush,

{Subarashiki Kono Sekai},

Face, erase, hush and crush,

{Subarashiki Kono Sekai},

Face, erase, hush and crush,

{Subarashiki Kono Sekai}.

*CUT MUSIC*

[] - Volume @ 75%, play concurrent with attached line

() - Music cuts out before line, and cuts in after line

{} - Volume @ 75%

Personally, I call this track Silencer, but if someone decides to pick this up, you can call it whatever you want. Also, I posted this here because Abadoss told me to.

Please someone make this; I'd be so happy if it was made, and high quality as well.

[Mirby]

Really? No one wants to help? I know people have previewed my crappy track. My e-mail says so. Please, if someone could pick this up, I'd be so happy! PLEASE!

[Cyril the Wolf]

NOOOB!

Well if i had the time I am actually interested. But I still have over 9000 remixes and originals to complete.

Oh yea, and I can rap. if you find someone to make a beat... .then I can just do the rapping

[The Vagrance]

I listened to the idea and the original track but tbh the best result I can imagine would probably just be for someone to sample the original track, which wouldn't exactly be OCR standards (but would probably set it off otherwise).

[Mirby]

@Cyril: I don't think your backlog was quite that large... but if I can find someone for the beat then...

@Vagrance:well even if it wasn't OCR standards I'd be satisfied. As long as it gets made, I'll be happy. But I figured this was the best place to post this, and Abadoss told me to.

[Mirby]

Megabump because I'm still rather interested in getting this created. And since I don't see the point of making a new thread for this same exact song since this one still exists, I figured I'd put it to good use.

Even if the last post was a year and a half ago. XD

[Damashii!!]

ahem....

rukunetsu?.... DiGi?..... Navi?

they should be around here somewhere.

i could try putting a raw beat down for you (and a better beatsmith could polish/improve it) if you're interested.

and dude... your lyrical flow is bauce soss.

[Mirby]

If you don't mind, go ahead, man!

And thanks for the compliment! :3

[Anorax]

If I could rap, I would. (Never tried though... hmm)

[Nonamer]

I *can* rap and have a pretty good track of rhythm, but I would need a microphone. I'll consider it.

[Mirby]

I'll take all the help I can get. Thank you so much, everyone! :3

[Mirby]

I just realized I never posted the source track...

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[Brandon Strader]

Who's the guy who did the demo rap? This is actually not a bad concept if you can find legit black people to do it up....

[Jamphibious]

I listened to the source and sort of mumbled the lyrics to myself in a rap-like rhythm, and it seems to work pretty well actually. Also I love the bass in this song, just saying.

Unfortunately I can't ACTUALLY rap but I do like the idea of this.

[Mirby]

Who's the guy who did the demo rap? This is actually not a bad concept if you can find legit black people to do it up....

What demo rap?