m68030 Posted April 24, 2002 Share Posted April 24, 2002 [00:48:44] <The_Wingless> psst, you up? [00:50:24] <The_Wingless> anyways, I hope you get this when you come back online [00:50:56] <The_Wingless> I was talking to Pretzel, and he okayed it if I submitted a song to you over the mIRC [00:51:06] <The_Wingless> it sounds like a scam, I know, but you can check with him [00:51:29] <The_Wingless> Anyways, because of a lot of technical problems, I couldn't post it on my mirrors in order to properly submit it in the usual OC fashion [00:51:36] <The_Wingless> that's why this little transaction is necessary [00:51:42] <The_Wingless> anywhore... here's the song [00:51:46] <The_Wingless> Enjoy, and I'm out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m68030 Posted April 24, 2002 Author Share Posted April 24, 2002 I like this one. It's smooth and relaxing and stuff. nice instrument work and all. I can't see much to complain about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Disco Dan Posted April 24, 2002 Share Posted April 24, 2002 I just don't think I can say yes in good conscience on this one. But that's mainly because I haven't heard it yet. 25% done... come on... ... 40% .. ... half done... I wish this was like mirc where you can play the song while it's downloading. 2/3... now it's halted at 2/3... still 2/3... hmmm... OTHER transactions are still moving... well shit. Guess I'll review this later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Disco Dan Posted April 24, 2002 Share Posted April 24, 2002 ok it finished this time. I guess I'm gonna say yes on this one. Despite the the dominant minor chord, which according to the original should be major. And it'd be one thing if a whole chord progression overhaul was going on, but since it's not, it seems wrong. But other than that, the rest of the song sounds well done. Well thought out, even the key change, which is kind of rough, but done successfully. And he managed to change key with all the instruments and didn't forget any. Yeah I'll give it a yes. DC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe Redifer Posted April 24, 2002 Share Posted April 24, 2002 Sounds good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orkybash Posted April 25, 2002 Share Posted April 25, 2002 One tip: when sequencing guitar chords, try offsetting the the notes a little to simulate a strum. I think that would make the guitars sound a bit less 'hard', if you know what I'm saying. Also, the mix could have used a slightly deeper reverb, especially in the beginning part. But despite those, I thought this was a well done mix. Very relaxing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saunders Posted April 26, 2002 Share Posted April 26, 2002 Well this song is pretty cool, very pretty and nice. I don't know anything about minor chords or major chords, or.. chords in general, heh. But I know what I like, and this definitely fits into that category. Good stuff from Wingless, always. Can't wait for Pretzel to post his Aphrodite Oceanus *hint hint* it's quite amazing itself. Definite Yes from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djpretzel Posted April 27, 2002 Share Posted April 27, 2002 One tip: when sequencing guitar chords, try offsetting the the notes a little to simulate a strum. I think that would make the guitars sound a bit less 'hard', if you know what I'm saying. Also, the mix could have used a slightly deeper reverb, especially in the beginning part. But despite those, I thought this was a well done mix. Very relaxing. Agreed - at time it sounded like an electric piano as the notes were dead-on quantized. But still, good stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Antonio Pizza Posted April 27, 2002 Share Posted April 27, 2002 Damn, the topic was locked as I was thinking of what to write! Inanycase. "Yes". There, I feel better now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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