Green Tree - Azalea Town Remix

[ncocs]

-Green Tree-

I want feedback on this one. Yes, I know the drums sound fake, and the instruments aren't all that good. But tell me what you think of it.

[Spakku]

Too much dir reet teet dirr. It's just so monotonous.

Can't really speak for the rest, the song just not being a style I'm fond of, but you've got to switch up that whistle thing at least a little.

[Rukunetsu]

While not terrible, it could use work (as you said yourself). Main issue being that the Synth is too loud (main melody). But the intro was actually pretty nice though. As for more technical issues, I'll leave that to the guys who actually know what they're talking about.

[E-Bison]

!!!

Your intro sounded like the start of an indie pop track, then instead of a lush guitar / indie texture... bWARaaarannn surprisingly epic detuned saws! I laughed out loud. (not because it was bad, but because it was so different than I expected!)

Those saws are killing your textures man! Try something lighter and more latin? Your chromatic texture and beat suggest latin rock.. ish... But the super saws are pure trance!

Also, open the chord voicing on the piano chords, the block chords are too big, and not necessary.

As for arrangement,

Why not bring in all the chords/textural elements 1st, and open the track up a bit? That melody is very distinctive and you don't want to over use it.

p.s.

-Whistle in intro kills the lofi combo organ feel.

[ncocs]

I'm gonna get this thread closed. This one won't ever be good enough. I promise.