Snow Taradien Posted December 3, 2010 Share Posted December 3, 2010 This is the very first cut, of the WIP I'm working on. By the finish I will have added vocals, and fixed up the arrange. The original song is "In a Snowbound Land" The Lyrics will be from Hamlet, the Play. Why? Not sure at the Moment. I feel like it I suppose. Do I need a better reason? Any and all feedback is wanted. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anorax Posted December 4, 2010 Share Posted December 4, 2010 Not bad, but I'm not quite sure what the source is... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snow Taradien Posted December 4, 2010 Author Share Posted December 4, 2010 Not bad, but I'm not quite sure what the source is... It's "In a Snowbound Land." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supahfast198 Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 It sounds pretty good for sure. At first, I didn't notice what it was from; you may want to add in some more of the synth background (the icy-feeling you get when listening to it) as maybe a clean guitar or something, it would make it more known from the source. Just my suggestion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M249-M4A1 Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 Good mix, sounds a bit dry though. Post a link to the source because we're all lazy to look it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supahfast198 Posted December 5, 2010 Share Posted December 5, 2010 it's one of my more favorite songs from the game Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snow Taradien Posted December 6, 2010 Author Share Posted December 6, 2010 It sounds pretty good for sure. At first, I didn't notice what it was from; you may want to add in some more of the synth background (the icy-feeling you get when listening to it) as maybe a clean guitar or something, it would make it more known from the source.Just my suggestion Not a bad suggestion. I'll consider adding it in to the next release. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted December 6, 2010 Share Posted December 6, 2010 Terrible guitar. The prominent percussion thing you're using is pretty dry, needs some reverb. Yes, needs more source. Whatever the lyrics will use from source, having more tracks using stuff from source is good. Not much else to say. Interesting idea. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snow Taradien Posted December 12, 2010 Author Share Posted December 12, 2010 Terrible guitar. The prominent percussion thing you're using is pretty dry, needs some reverb.Yes, needs more source. Whatever the lyrics will use from source, having more tracks using stuff from source is good. Not much else to say. Interesting idea. Still looking for better samples, I know what you mean. More source in next cut. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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