SkyRiderX Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 This is a remix of "How she sees the world" from Bioshock 2. This was made as a friend's B-Day gift since she's a hardcore fan of Bioshock! Hope you guys enjoy it and any feedback is welcome! Source: Remix : http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/521971 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esperado Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 it sounds like a nightmare at the circus! which makes it harder for me to comment on, since i dont know much about creepy music critiquing. its good to see someone doing something with bioshock though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkyRiderX Posted March 14, 2013 Author Share Posted March 14, 2013 Thanks! I know right! No one thinks to do anything from Bioshock! xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brandon Strader Posted March 14, 2013 Share Posted March 14, 2013 This is great. I think the lead writing could be refined to make it less mechanical, with more human timing and velocity for each note. The voices could be cleaned up a little to make them easier to discern, but I like the vibe they bring to the song. There's a cutoff at the end, and there's also clipping throughout the song which could be fixed. Some EQ'ing to clean up the low frequencies may help, as well as pulling back on the master compression or limiter (and of course, limit it to -.1db to help prevent clipping). You could also expand the arrangement, it's a nice short piece but it doesn't really go anywhere or seem to express too much of a "song structure". I really like it as an artistic piece. Keep going! And the "thank you" at the end was far too loud! Nice work, keep it coming! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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