djpretzel Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 email sub file Fleepa's Theme.mp3 I remade one of my favorite songs of all time. It is the water flying corridor in the guardian legend. I have created one complete soundtrack fo my own. My website can be located at: http://www.mts.net/~esuru/. My email address is: richard.savetara@gmail.com. Thank you. _________________________________________________________________ Designer Mail isn't just fun to send, it's fun to receive. Use special stationery, fonts and colors. http://join.msn.com/?pgmarket=en-ca&page=byoa/prem&xAPID=1994&DI=1034&SU=http://hotmail.com/enca&HL=Market_MSNIS_Taglines Start enjoying all the benefits of MSN® Premium right now and get the first two months FREE*. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liontamer Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 http://www.zophar.net/nsf/guardian.zip - Track 21 (also 22) Very muddy and lossy atmosphere, everything sounds too wet. There's some light warbling in there and there ain't much treble going on. Doesn't even sound like it's in stereo, but it doesn't particularly matter. For a 192kbps encoding, this sounds more like 80kbps. Arrangement evolves a bit, but the texture is very simplistic. Decent effort at personalizing the arrangement, but it's really repetitive and boring. You change the feel and tempo around a bit during the two minutes, and have some original writing via the vox and strings supporting the piano melody, which is good. But you're arranging the same few bars of the source tune over and over again. There's more to that song than that, so incorporate some of it into the mix. 2 minutes will almost never cut it here anymore. Develop the ideas further, and learn more about production techniques via the ReMixing forum. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkeSword Posted July 23, 2006 Share Posted July 23, 2006 Larry's right. This is repetitive and boring. It's the same five notes over and over again, with little going on in the background to really keep things interesting. Needs way more. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zircon Posted July 27, 2006 Share Posted July 27, 2006 Hmm.. yeah, big problem here is that everything sounds thickly reverbed and centered in the stereo field (mono, basically). Tone down the reverb and give the individual parts some room to breathe. Anyway, one thing you have to understand about OCR is that we're not looking for remakes of songs, but ReMixes. There is a distinction. You gotta really develop the tune into something more than the often simplistic melodies that were there to begin with. Add your own spin to it, and not just by changing instruments either. There is nothing inherently wrong with remaking, covering, or upgrading songs either; it's just not what we're looking for here. Check the ReMixing and Works in Progress forums for additional help. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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