Gario Posted March 7, 2019 Share Posted March 7, 2019 Prior Decision Contact Information Platonist Jonas Loman soundcloud.com/platonist 16372 Submission Information Legend Of Mana Nocturnal Lumina Composer - Yoko Shimomura ... and another attempt at this one. Changes include but are not limited to: * No intro that is identical to the outro. * No more synth string. * More usage of the flute-esque lead (it's actually a bass sample, but hey!) * Less muddy and better balance. This is probably my last revisit of the song. Hope it goes well. Cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MindWanderer Posted March 8, 2019 Share Posted March 8, 2019 Better. The lengthy and repetitive middle section has been shortened, and that was my biggest concern. Still a bit muddy because of how busy it is, but I'm more than happy with the improvements. YES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gario Posted March 9, 2019 Author Share Posted March 9, 2019 (edited) Seeing that I was the sole voice of approval last time, it's no surprise that I enjoy it even more this time around. I will give credit to the other votes, though - sending it back was the right decision, as this is much more dynamic than the other version. I could still see an argument that the mixing is still a bit of an issue, but it doesn't at all sink the track (I didn't think it did last time, either). It went from a shaky pass to a solid one, in my book - lots has been done to make the arrangement more dynamic, and everyone listening is better for it. Let's get this thing on the front page. YES Edited March 9, 2019 by Gario Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liontamer Posted April 12, 2019 Share Posted April 12, 2019 More dynamic, and that's the name of the game. I also noted how there's one line reminiscent of munky's old school Guardian Legend mix. Good job enhancing this, Jonas! YES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nutritious Posted April 18, 2019 Share Posted April 18, 2019 Liking your take on the theme here. Very creative, more upbeat, very ocr-esque. Good energy and use of complimentary sound ideas. Personally, I felt like the mix sounded a bit dry - at least until the beats really kick in. It gets a little dense at that point, so I guess you risk making it really cluttered by adding 'verb. Still, I think adding a touch (more) reverb could be in order to give the sounds more depth. All in all, though, good stuff. YES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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