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Sorry for posting two tracks at once. I was hoping to get feedback on something I feel is more akin to the type of music I like to write as well. Still, I think for OC Remix this isn't liberal enough, but I think when I was looking at doing this, I didn't want to stray too far from the original, but add to it. Still, maybe there is something worth exploring that I haven't opened my mind to. With that being said, I think I'm ready for some honest feedback instead of being stuck in my head lol. Thank you for your time and I appreciate any help. 

As a side note, I'm also somewhat of a newbie when it comes to mixing as well so if there is something that is offensive sounding, by all means feel free to critique!

 

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My arrangement
https://drive.google.com/file/d/11sE7p7KYl-NlTCV-86fmJBs3PJiATI7H/view?usp=sharing

 

 

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I don't know the source, but this is a sweet piece. The slightly muted piano creates a lovely, warm atmosphere. I particularly enjoyed the woodwinds. I'm hard pressed to find things to critique, but if you spend any amount of time in the workshop, you'll learn that's pretty common for me. Still. You made something good here, keep it up.

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12 hours ago, Souperion said:

I don't know the source, but this is a sweet piece. The slightly muted piano creates a lovely, warm atmosphere. I particularly enjoyed the woodwinds. I'm hard pressed to find things to critique, but if you spend any amount of time in the workshop, you'll learn that's pretty common for me. Still. You made something good here, keep it up.

Thank you for the feedback. I added the source music to the main post. The piano is Spitfire's soft piano which is definitely in my top 10 vsts. It isn't very versatile but it's extremely effective at what it does. I also liked the way the woodwinds turned out here. Honestly I haven't been able to produce a track where they sound as nice yet. Maybe I should try and expand on their use on this track if this is too conservative a take? 

Edit: After some consideration I really like this take, even in it's conservativeness. But I'd like an evaluation to see if even then it still needs something else. So I'm changing the tag to ready for review.

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