Mario RPG Ending Song

[AMT]

This took about 5ish hours in FL Studio. It's only the demo, so I couldn't save it, but I wanted to post it here still to get an idea of where I'm at mixing / production skill wise. This is my first attempt at anything electronic, so, yeah. Please leave feedback! Thanks.

http://www.blueisotope.com/Geno1.mp3

[Radiowar]

Well the sounds are noticeably cheesy FL sounds, but I like the way you used them. Reminds me of PINE*am. One thing I would suggest is taking out the trills in the melody, they don't really work in this context, especially with a faster tempo. It's not a bad start.

[Skrypnyk]

OOoOOooooo Oo o oo OooOOooOOoo o o........

These sounds make baby jesus cry.

I will say you're on your way, you have the idea, etc. etc.

But you still have a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo^55ng way to go.

[sabrigami]

i like were you going with this too, but i'm sorry to say that the others are right about the sounds you used, they do sound a little cheesy . and i also noticed a few sour sounding notes in the main theme too, but i really really think you have a winner here if you work on it. i can't wait to see more

[HoboKa]

buy the studio deathbyspoon...or use other means to acquire it , cuz this woulda been a good song to hold on to =(

[Theory of N]

reminds me of my first remix when I was still using the FL demo...

[AMT]

Alright, yeah, it looks like it's back to REAPER for me for now, as I decided to go with a midi keyboard instead of FL. Thanks for the responses all! This can get locked or deleted or whatever now.