Overall I am going to have to agree with Andrew on this one. Right now I feel like things are not meshing well enough together, either through the different sections, or the combination of the chip and real sounds. The first transition is particularly rough, and needs some better indication about the change as well as a smoother move overall. The second transition is much better than the first, but it still sounds pretty different from the two other sections and causes a bit of disjointedness. The sections need something that can connect them a lot better, to make the overall song more cohesive to the listener.
The chip and real sounds right now are also sounding like they are not connected. The chip stuff is very dry and doesn't sit in the soundscape with the rest of the instruments. Work on having everything mesh a little better.
As Vinnie mentioned, the last third or so of the song isn't really clear on where the source is, if there is source in there at all. With the rest of the song as is it does still work over the bar for source usage, but a clearer connection will help things along, and add more roots to the original source.
I think this one needs some more work before it is ready. NO (resubmit)