This is so dirty Gritty & groovy... i dont think i want to shower just yet.
I havent done any mixes since WinGroove was new so i dont have any really suggestions, but keep going in the direction youre moving.I'm personally not a big fan of synth bass so maybe a few less "growling instruments? Also a tight 808 drum would define the heavy more instead of being lost behind the melody...(so much for no suggestions) also that bit of flair at the end would work really nice in the middle somwhere too with a short dramatic pause before decsending into absolute lunacy.
BTW the source title is Into Sandy's City