MojoHamster

Great performances, great composition. Kinda wish the judges had pulled this one back a for some fine tuning of the stereo balancing (not just talking about the hard panning, it's a bit wide and center in places and there's some acoustic inconsistency) It's a hard criticism to give, especially as total amateur with conductive hearing loss . No doubt the blending of styles probably ups the mixing degree of difficulty considerably.

You're not wrong. Such a great Hype track. Harmonies, Synth solos, Hip-hop, RnB, it's all there. They really save the best for last with the outro too. I recommend everyone at least give this track a listen.

Cool, it even has his rendition of Baby Be Mine. Stone Warrior is still one of my favourite all time remixes. My thoughts go out to Shnabs - not that I know him or anything. From one turtle to another. Probably

C64 is the enemy! I was a Sinclair Spectrum owning child! 10 PRINT "SPECTRUM RULEZ" 20 GOTO 10

I'd love to do a mix of Prelude of Light + Windfall island from TWW. I'd love it even more if someone good did that remix. Seeds planted.

Smells like Metallica VS Napster

So like, the arrangement is really good. The live instrumentation is well played. Transitions are good, no part sticks out like a sore thumb from one to the next. I hope there's always a place for a good arrangement/performance. After all, The 6th track on Nevermind was recorded on a 2nd hand acoustic guitar held in tune by duct tape. It's a shame about the furore since I've seen a couple great decisions that have picked out some amazing 'lo-fi' remixes. http://ocremix.org/remix/OCR01991/ is another fine example.

Ok I've been back, made quite a few significant changes, so if anyone has anything to add before I submit, any feedback is gratefully accepted.

It's curious to consider a private key in the comparative context of 'someone's Brownie recipe'. If you were able to figure out the recipe by tasting it and discerning the ingredients, are you stealing it as though you took the page out of that person's recipe book. When does figuring out how someone does something become an 'immoral act of theft'. It's a fascinating philosophical question. PS I agree with a lot of what JackKieser says in this thread.

Well, if I was to give credit where it was due, I would at least have to concede that it drives marketing innovation and creativity. Similarly, statistical analysis has to evolve to account for the benefits of creative marketing. But in relation to the quality of video game production, absolutely. Indefinitely, perhaps not. Given that the 'profit motive' is rather demonstrably a component of Capitalism (admittedly, somewhat a vague word at best) then, I meant Capitalism, but I am assuredly educated by your use of term 'profit motive'. I'm really the internet equivalent of a drunken tramp shouting at a wall, but the example of Capitalism as a driving force for creativity is something I've been exposed to on numerous occasions. Finally, I boldly exclaim whilst paraphrasing Jon Stewart - "I disagree with Capitalism but I'm pretty sure I'm not Stalin."

When marketing is more lucrative than development in directing sales, the craft dies. If ever there was an argument against the foolish assumption that competition drives creativity, here it is, naked in the wind. Yes Capitalism, welcome to shrinkage. I'm glad someone with an audience is finally holding a microscope up to EA.

Hmm, I think you're right Roz. I'm tinkering a bit more, trying to get a little more source into the melody and a little more variance out of the lead. I'm switching to keys over guitar since I think keys are easier to humanize. I'd love to play myself but, I can't practice like I used to and it wont sound tight. Anyway, I'll post the last mix when I'm done tinkering. I spent some time humanising everything I could (being careful not to 'over-humanise'). It's quite subtle but just noticeable I think. I'm buoyed on because my mixes usually tend to stagnate at this point, but maybe I've learned a couple new things this time around.

Updated one last time, I feel like I've addressed some of the useful comments, it should sound much less compressed. The drums should now have a little more stereo quality. Also each instrument should have its place in the mix without too much overlap. I'm curious if anyone thinks it's worth submitting to the judging process or I should just bank the progress and look forward to my next project. Many thanks

Updated 11/02/11 (02/11/11 US date) with revamped version.

I really like it. The dynamics are really effective I think, it flows without ever feeling jarred. Which is surprisingly difficult, especially when rotating instruments, in my experience.