HoboKa

yay it has a good snare now. Good changes with the song too V-dawg. I'm not sure on how to critique this now, asides from that it needs a little more energy methinks. The breakdown is very nice btw. The change up of the drums is very effective after the halfway point too.

ummmm Kenny my man, the links are kinda messed up :S, like uber messed.

Rofl thanks Gario - that is a LOT more than I expected for a response from other ppl. A little disheartening too, I must say. Brutally honest IS better than sugar coating stuff then having the J's vomit on my works though. And are you forreals that the DJ Prez said, "Yo dawg, go critique that nub, HoboKa"?? (or something on that line) or are you just messing with me? lol Over all though, this seems real daunting - I feel that just working on new compositions and getting my production skills up is better than trying to salvage this piece, as you make it sound that it's a pretty awful mess. It'd help if I had decent samples too...not saying that you can't do without them (as we all know that DarkeSword uses soundfonts mainly - and he's a pro at EQ) But I shall TRY to polish it up and do some of your suggestions. Thanks for the comments man

thanks very much, but i need input from more prominant members of OCR...I don't want to submit this and get an instant rejection like my last stuff...could be just that the J's hate me iono.

http://www.fileupyours.com/view/218181/Death%20by%20Dragon.mp3 pretty much done methinks. Comments?

lol sorry Sarifus. You can be non imaginary joe then

yeah my transitions are weird...im gonna get a new HH rhythm for the main beat as well as fix them drums at 3:00. Though I like the beat for them, I agree that they need some fills. Dunno wut I can do about the ending...actually I have an idea. bear with me dood

Woooooot, way to go Ro!!! Now you gotta help me get posted :D (J's are like noooooo)

welcome aboard matie and thx

>: - ) 10 char

scratch that - another update...on a roll here. Comments pweeez http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/snwh/LoD_MegaBoss_remix_ver4 :^(

ummm...me myself and Imaginary Joe apparently

Update Numbeeerr 3 1/2 guys. Got some more composing done, as well as some tweaking and stuff. I still need to write more, as well as the ending though, so don't comment about the ending plz. http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/fhtc/LoD_MegaBoss_remix_ver3 Enjoy.

Don't bother Jovian, got it here. Thanks for the comments - plz keep em coming guys, I need the input >< http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uzfNlLPMVHA

http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/uozq/LoD_MegaBoss_remix_ver2 UPDATEEZ

nooo now YOU??? Who can I gloat at when I destroy them in the competition now??? lol

yeah the SFX near the end failed major time...gonna edit those out.

midi: http://www.vgmusic.com/music/console/sony/ps1/LODMBOSS.mid http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/ieis/LoD_MegaBoss_remix_ver1 It's about 3/4 done or so...def. needs work on the EQ sector so don't cry about that too much plz - I'll work it out ^_~. Hopefully the composition isn't random either (too much so, anyways, knowing me ) Yeah, yeah I know I've been posting 10001 songs here, but I've been getting inspirations like Ecstasy mixed with crack and Chuck Norris.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xZwrx4eMLr8 here's the original guys. Use this as a reference as well if you must. I've got a new collaborater for this song - he's got some REAL nice samples and synths so this tracks about to get real hawt n sexy.

thx zephyr ^^ found something useful there

eh, tried that site already T_T, thanks tho

yes snappleGirl, we all know this tune rocks - now stop being a goof.

I'm trying to find hammer and anvil sounds similar to this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VS8iFTv-dzo (start at 15 seconds)

You can try anyways, good chance I'll win either way =D

http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/irct/DKC_Far-out_Frog Update. Did SOME of your suggestions Rozo. I'll get the rest of them down . Also added some goodies to make it a bit more cohesive, the ending is much less ass-tastic too