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MrKyle

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  1. First thoughts:

    The original has percs, but it seems your piano work is intended to be more subtle and human.  If you are going for a more emotional performance, perhaps take the percs out all together and pursue the piano/strings (maybe a piano quintet even?) concept more.  As far as the key change goes, you could toy around with modal changes, relative minor/dominant key changes, arpeggios of the melody, octave shifts, counterpoint harmonies, or even smooth time signature shifts, to name a few.  As long as your deviation returns to the melody in a comprehensible way, you can do all sorts of crazy fun stuff.

    It will move more away from a cover and toward a remix if you keep developing a more personalized and original piano performance.  You can get more liberal with the melody, and as long as you stay in key, can create a new melodic lead without losing the character of the original.  

  2. Hi Virtual Boy, welcome to the Workshop!

    So, it will be tough for others at this point to give you much feedback since there is little to go on.  You've got an idea, a direction, and trace of the soundscape that you are hoping to build but there is a lot more to build (you know this, of course) and we'd need more of that structure and content to start giving solid crits and ideas.  There are so many different directions you can go with this, even staying within the Trance arena.  For us to start funneling you into a specific collection of compositional concepts would be to start co-writing this with you.  

    My advise, humbly, would be to build out a structure of the entire song.  Write it so that you like the general flow of the whole piece, start to finish.  Then, post that with a description of things you had in mind and questions you have about trying to accomplish them.  Then, the Workshop will be a valuable ally :)  Keep at it!

  3. Super enjoyed this.  A lot of fun and a hydrogen bomb of positivity.  Great stuff!

    Perhaps those hearing an off-beat arp are listening through some sort of near-field setup that doesn't cover the whole frequency spectrum (or cover it well)?  Headphones, studio monitors, and hifi system all sound on-point.  Computer monitor speakers, sound can appear to be off-beat.  Just my experience.

  4. Ok, awesome. melody, very well done! This was a pleasure to listen to every second of the way.  I'm not intending to pigeon-hole at all, because your playing and tone are all your own, but I get this great vibe of Beck playing through Vai's gear...with Satch-like pinch and tap harmonics.  Super expansive, super quacky, super rich.  And a tight mix to boot.  Repeatin' this for awhile.

  5. Just wanted to check and see what the 1,2,3 of this would be.  

     

    If you have a remix that was accepted but conditional upon correct encoding, do you just email the updated file to the Submissions inbox like a resub, or is there a different process?  Sorry, I wasn't able to find the directions for this situation.

     

    Thanks for any help!

     

    Cheers,

     

    MrKyle

  6. Some parts of this I really dig (the kick ducking is tasty, the bird FX, the bass line as a whole, ) but others I didn't (the delayed reverb on the centered hand percussion, ambient intro, the scratchy shuffling starting at 3:13 (meant to be rustling leaves?), and the breathy woodwind-like (flute?) sustain that is layered onto the tail of the solo piano notes).  It kinda leaves me in limbo on the track as a whole.  Yeah.  I feel like I get the vibe as a whole, but it just doesn't firmly place me there.

  7. Great final execution from when it was bouncing on the WIP Forums.  I actually really like that it wasn't trying to be super realistic.  It makes it innately fun and blends nicely into a genre of Japanese TV/Commercial/spot music that is done nigh identical to this.  "Authentic" instruments in a more playful, engineered way.  In that sense, it's actually super authentic!  

    Fxsnowy, well done.

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