Okay...good stuff first. The kick drum used sounds really good, in fact percussion's do too.
Around 1:04 I love how the source tune kicks in, piano sounds crisp and clear.
That's about all I like about this one.
Take this with a grain of salt, because I really can't stand gated trance synths.
BUT, the gated synth really makes this track sound utterly cheesy, unoriginal, and most importantly boring! Esp since there seems to be no modulation going on at all with the gate itself, which if there was it might have been a bit more interesting. Or maybe some filtering, or something.