Hi.
I am working on a rock/metal/something remix on the Talon theme from Saga 3 (
)Besides the obvious lack of fresh guitar strings, intonation and tightness of the performance I am more concerned that I cannot seem to find some parts to extend it.
As it is, it stands pretty short. I know that the source tune is not very long, but I have a hard time finding alternate melodies besides some original stuff which might or might not fit the piece. I have the feeling it might be just too simple or boring in terms of melody.
Also, I am unsure about the slow part in the middle, it comes pretty surprising, but I guess it can work, I kinda like it. Meh
Some opinions would be greatly appreciated.
Many thanks in advance!
Oh yeah, link to the WIP: Clicky!
Cheers,
Luhny