MangaMan

Hey Party Peeps, MangaMan here. I've been working on this one for a while now and I would love to get some opinions or comments on the lyrics for this classic anime song. Now I'm not fluent in Japanese, so what I did was look up 5 different translations of this song and use them to create my own translation that matches with the tempo of the song. The version below is my current draft of this piece. I have a bit of a rhyming scheme going on but I'll let you guys be the judges on it. If you have no idea what I'm talking about, here's a link to the actual song: And here's my translated lyrics You’re a Shock. That the sky is falling, because of your love. You’re a Shock. That my heart’s castcading, down the wing of a dove. Even if they take my passionate heart and bind in chains, The chains are useless now. (I’ll take down the bastard that gets in my way with just one, Finger) You’re a Shock. Heartbeats rise with love, like a beating drum You’re a Shock, My heartbeat rises, to your beat of love Drifting through these moments, my yearning soul that looks for you, is burning hot with passion. Everything it touches will melt down and scatters it all away Set off on a journey you left in sorrow Saying your protecting our love But you’ve lost sight, lost sight of tomorrow I don’t want to have to see a face that’s forgotten, forgotten how to smile Take back, Take back the Love! You’re a Shock. That your piercing passion cut’s apart the night You’re a Shock. You could take that passion and slash apart my night Nobody on earth is strong enough to break apart Our precious harmony Holding your hand in mine, I will never again, let go Set off on a journey you left in sorrow Saying your protecting our love But you’ve lost sight, lost sight of tomorrow I don’t want to have to see a face that’s forgotten, forgotten how to smile Take back, Take back the Love!

I was told that it was okay to post things non-video games here. I'm a vocalist that's been singing pretty much all my life, took part in a college Wisconsin All State Choir. I'm still a noob when it comes to playing an instrument so I've mostly been doing karaoke on my youtube channel as well as my anime/manga reviews as the MangaMan. Here is one of my latest songs, were I've taken an instrumental track from the Fairy Tail anime Original SoundTrack and created lyrics for it. I supply all of the vocal parts you'll hear. Still testing the water's with the volume control and getting the levels right. This not only is a testament of my lyric writing but also my singing prowess. Please tell me what you all think. http://www.youtube.com/user/GeniusIncarnate0?feature=guide#p/c/7A807A76507C0964/12/ijHJT5yN4Ek

If your still looking for someone, I'm all up for lending my voice. This is the best example of my vocal talents that I have so far: http://www.youtube.com/user/GeniusIncarnate0?feature=guide#p/c/7A807A76507C0964/1/9hlGhyKxx1o If you need further convincing, contact me via, email, message, or skype if you got it.

Hey MangaMan here, I would be interested in helping to write lyrics and sing if possible. Don't know what PM means, but if you need some examples of what I can do, here's a link to my youtube page: http://www.youtube.com/user/GeniusIncarnate0?feature=guide#p/c/7A807A76507C0964/1/9hlGhyKxx1o That's the best example of my work that I have, if you need some more convincing contact me via email or message and/or skype.