Hey Brandon, thanks for the critique! Sorry about the neck; some ice should do the trick. I'll try to fiddle with the bend to see if I can make it work, such as using a different articulation and adjusting the speed. If it doesn't work, I might just have to split the notes. No biggie, as it's just that one time where it bends.
As for the violins sounding more natural, could you be more specific please? I thought I did quite a bit in terms of mixing the dynamics between soft and strong, legato, a bit of off-timing, and swelling during the more emotional parts like a real violinist, but that's just me. Are there specific parts you could point out where it sounds particularly mechanical?
I had a feeling some people might wade into a bit of mud later on. Should I put some more low-end EQ on both strings and choir, or just one? If so, which one?