Brandon Strader

'Tis cool, bro. You attempted it and came up with something finished... That alone makes me happy.

Of course, getting the thing closer to the source would help, eh? Look at post #44 on this thread (Oh yeah, that's taking me back, now, lol). That gives you not only the chord structure of the song (if you can read Roman Numerals), but also some insight on the piece, as well (from yours, truly ).

Good luck with the edit

By the way, I had this message on my VM board for about a week. Posted it in the wrong place, like a moron, lol.