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Hey I think the title is pretty self explanatory. I'd enjoy some feedback. I was really trying to capture that MIDI pizzicato of the original in the arrangement. You'll see what I mean. Enjoy!

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My only critique is that the transitions between variations (if you will) are abrupt -- you could use more transitions between them.

Haha, yeah you're right. That IV -> V / #VI when I modulate down is a total cop-out. My bad :P

Thanks for the feedback, everyone. Obviously I think highly of the OCR community's opinion(s) or else I wouldn't post here.

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You should refine the chord changes a little, maybe add in a rhythm section (or not -- I think this could stand on its own with smoother transitions), and work this up for the site. This place could use unique sounds, and your playing is obviously up to the bar.

Maybe posting this in the WIP forums would help get a few more opinions if you're interested in the idea -- again, IMO you're definitely capable of it if it's something you want to pursue.

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