Super Mario Galaxy - Teresa Race

[Tex]

Original

Remix

It was an idea I had to bring new feelings for this theme. I like using small wave samples to write music. So this is how it turned out.

[Tables]

First of all, thank you SO much, I was looking for this song for a while and I had no idea what it was called until now! And I have it now too, yay.

As for your remix, I like what you're doing with the melody but the piece feels really empty, there should be some more stuff happening in the background (even for a mellow piece). Plus, while I see you added some nice original 'spinoffs' from the theme occasionally, I think its just a little too close to the source.

Keep it up though, you have a cool start.

[The Derrit]

So did you just use the original instruments and rearrange them a lil bit?

[Tex]

There is no square wave on the original.

[Psychog13]

The intrument you are using sounds ace, but ir definatly needs accompanyment I think. Also it seems that rather than upgrading it it looks like u took the best part of the tune out and downgraded it

its also very hard to make an almost perfect tune better (all the tracks from galaxy are pretty awsome) unless you completely change the feel of it ( and in most cases masacre the source hehe ^-^; )

Well either way reguardless of that it still sounded good mate, some serious potential, keep that square coming! ^-^

(also sorry if this sounded too critical, i really did like it )