djpretzel Posted July 20, 2004 Share Posted July 20, 2004 i submitted this Remix about 2-3 month ago and it doesnt seem to appear in ur judges forum. So i decided to check the ftp and all files on angelfire were gone... I´m sorry for this and uploaded it once more on the same Server. i hope u will listen to it and give it a judge. Apologize for troubles keep up ur good work ur listener AngelsDen _____________________________________________________________ Desktop Themes, wallpapers, videos, games... ALL your Anime and Final Fantasy needs for FREE! Visit Anime Theme at http://www.animetheme.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liontamer Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 http://www.alpha-ii.com/snesmusic/spcsets/ed2.rsn - "Battle #1" The EQing's actually not bad on this one. Violin lead is very unnaturally done and needs dynamics. Some of the notes of the organ-like keyboard are bad if you pay attention to that area; same with the synth guitar during the section it had in tandem with the choir vox. The percussion's too generic here as well and doesn't really have anything going on. The ending a little too abrupt as well. All of the instruments are flat and lack energy. This likely is a MIDI/SPC rip of "Battle #1,", though I'll leave a potential NO Override up to someone else (I iz n00b juj). In any case, this is a cover mix that just doesn't have it. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkeSword Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 Drums are too repetitive. It sounds like one of those freshman drummers you meet in high school that wants to start a band, but he only knows how to play one drum pattern. You've got one nice fill in the ending, but the entire mix is plagued by the same beat over and over again. The violin lead is too thin and sounds stretched. You've gotta be careful when you use your samples; they don't always have the range that the instruments they're sampling do. General advice for everyone who might read this: Treat your violin samples like violin samples, not violins (this goes for any other instrument as well). Also, the arrangement is lacking; not much deviation from the original, and quite repetitive. It's not overridable, but it's certainly lacking. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protricity Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 Exactly the same as the original less minor minor differences, none of them improvements. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrayLightning Posted August 4, 2004 Share Posted August 4, 2004 I think Darkesword covered this one perfectly. I can't help but agree. I enjoyed this piece though, but mostly because of the original. The end parts are very nicely done, but this is definitely not up to production and arrangement standards. Keep it up. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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