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The intro's not too bad, but you can tell that this won't be engaging from the outset due to how far in the back the vox sounded. Percussion just keeps the beat, but doesn't offer anything beyond that to add depth to the piece. EQing is mostly the low-end the whole time, so nothing sounds clean. 2:56 of a 4:04 track was the significant "development" within the mix as the lead changed, but we're still treading water with the same stuff here with a little more volume on the vox in the background. Abrupt drum & CYMBAL SHOT ending (:!:). Nothin' spells lovin' like a generic, non sequitur finish. The overall delivery was incredibly flat.

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Messy string work along with poor mastering brings this mix down. Low end is too high (ha!). Guitar sounds so GM. :(

The arrangement is repetitive. Not much in the way of development other than passing that eighth note continuo line to different intstuments.

Needs more work.

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everything is just very simple

the bass plays nothing but quarter notes, shifting pitch only after every two bars. the lead guitar part adds nothing as it is so simple and akward. I have heard not a single interesting rhythm in the whole song. i guess this guy's quantize function only goes up to 1/8th note resolution.

bah.

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